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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c3W-GkT6DoI "Dodo's Theme"]] is a fun, energetic piece that perfectly captures the wildness of Jammbo's titular little workers.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c3W-GkT6DoI "Dodo's Theme"]] is a fun, energetic fun piece that perfectly captures the wildness of Jammbo's titular little workers.
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A show that's all about music inevitably has some great, catchy musical beats.
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A show that's all about music inevitably has some great, catchy musical beats.beats!
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* Ongo's song in "White Dodo" starts as a simple flute piece, but expands as the episode progresses, culminating in a bittersweet complete version at the end of the episode, performed in the White Dodo's memory.
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* Ongo's song in "White Dodo" starts as a simple flute piece, but expands as [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OMpt-esKjyY "Let's Go Together!"]], the episode progresses, culminating in show's theme song, is energetic, hopeful, and a bittersweet complete version at perfect way to begin the end of the episode, performed in the White Dodo's memory.fun!
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* "Holding Hands" is a boppy song with wholesome lyrics about friendship and sticking together.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RWRZQXX4cDs "Holding Hands" Hands Around the World"]] is a boppy heartwarming song with wholesome lyrics about a message of friendship and sticking together.togetherness.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c3W-GkT6DoI "Dodo's Theme"]] is a fun, energetic piece that perfectly captures the wildness of Jammbo's titular little workers.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cBnUo3laP0c "Jump Now!"]] is a catchy tune that tells the listener to get up, jump with joy and "show the world how good you feel inside"!
* On the topic of the show's score, Ongo's song in "White Dodo" starts as a simple flute piece, but expands as the episode progresses, culminating in a bittersweet complete version at the end of the episode, performed in the White Dodo's memory.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c3W-GkT6DoI "Dodo's Theme"]] is a fun, energetic piece that perfectly captures the wildness of Jammbo's titular little workers.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cBnUo3laP0c "Jump Now!"]] is a catchy tune that tells the listener to get up, jump with joy and "show the world how good you feel inside"!
* On the topic of the show's score, Ongo's song in "White Dodo" starts as a simple flute piece, but expands as the episode progresses, culminating in a bittersweet complete version at the end of the episode, performed in the White Dodo's memory.
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Trimming Word Cruft, and the way the introductory line is structured makes it sound as though it's surprising the series has good music when it's about music. It should be expected, not surprising.
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For a show that's all about music, it surely has some great, catchy musical beats.
* Ongo's song in "White Dodo" for sure. It starts as a simple flute piece, but expands as the episode progresses, culminating in a bittersweet complete version at the end of the episode, performed in the White Dodo's memory.
* Ongo's song in "White Dodo" for sure. It starts as a simple flute piece, but expands as the episode progresses, culminating in a bittersweet complete version at the end of the episode, performed in the White Dodo's memory.
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* "Holding Hands" is a boppy song with wholesome lyrics about friendship and sticking together.
* "Holding Hands" is a boppy song with wholesome lyrics about friendship and sticking together.
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* "Moving Time" is an energetic instrumental piece.
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* "Playtime" is a nice, hip-hoppy beat.
* "Moving Time" is an energetic instrumental piece.
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