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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/angel "Angel"]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6rjN36OKpuM that starts out as a good]] and catchy club song, then [[spoiler:during the chorus, it suddenly becomes a dubstep version of "One-Winged Angel"!]] Near the end, [[spoiler:there's some "J.E.N.O.V.A." mixed in, as well.]]
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/angel "Angel"]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6rjN36OKpuM that starts out as a good]] and catchy club song, song]], then [[spoiler:during the chorus, it suddenly becomes a dubstep version of "One-Winged Angel"!]] Angel"]]! Near the end, [[spoiler:there's some "J.E.N.O.V.A." mixed in, as well.]]well]].
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/angel "Angel"]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6rjN36OKpuM that starts out as a good]] EarWorm club song, then [[spoiler:during the chorus, it suddenly becomes a dubstep version of "One-Winged Angel"!]] Near the end, [[spoiler:there's some "J.E.N.O.V.A." mixed in, as well.]]
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/angel "Angel"]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6rjN36OKpuM that starts out as a good]] EarWorm and catchy club song, then [[spoiler:during the chorus, it suddenly becomes a dubstep version of "One-Winged Angel"!]] Near the end, [[spoiler:there's some "J.E.N.O.V.A." mixed in, as well.]]
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/angel "Angel"]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6rjN36OKpuM that starts out as a good]] EarWorm club song, then [[spoiler:during the chorus, it suddenly becomes a dubstep version of "One-Winged Angel"!]] Additionally, near the end, [[spoiler:there's some J.E.N.O.V.A. mixed in, as well.]]
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/angel "Angel"]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6rjN36OKpuM that starts out as a good]] EarWorm club song, then [[spoiler:during the chorus, it suddenly becomes a dubstep version of "One-Winged Angel"!]] Additionally, near Near the end, [[spoiler:there's some J."J.E.N.O.V.A. " mixed in, as well.]]
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/angel "Angel"]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6rjN36OKpuM that starts out as a good]] Earworm club song, then [[spoiler:during the chorus, it suddenly becomes a dubstep version of "One-Winged Angel"!]] Additionally, near the end, [[spoiler:there's some J.E.N.O.V.A. mixed in, as well.]]
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/angel "Angel"]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6rjN36OKpuM that starts out as a good]] Earworm EarWorm club song, then [[spoiler:during the chorus, it suddenly becomes a dubstep version of "One-Winged Angel"!]] Additionally, near the end, [[spoiler:there's some J.E.N.O.V.A. mixed in, as well.]]
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/angel "Angel"]], that starts out as a generic club song, then [[spoiler:during the chorus, it suddenly becombs a dubstep version of "One-Winged Angel"!]] Additionally, near the end, [[spoiler:there's some J.E.N.O.V.A. mixed in, as well.]]
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/angel "Angel"]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6rjN36OKpuM that starts out as a generic good]] Earworm club song, then [[spoiler:during the chorus, it suddenly becombs becomes a dubstep version of "One-Winged Angel"!]] Additionally, near the end, [[spoiler:there's some J.E.N.O.V.A. mixed in, as well.]]
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/angel "Angel"]], that starts out as a generic club song, then [[spoiler:during the chorus, it suddenly becombs a dubstep version of "One-Winged Angel"!]]
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/angel "Angel"]], that starts out as a generic club song, then [[spoiler:during the chorus, it suddenly becombs a dubstep version of "One-Winged Angel"!]]Angel"!]] Additionally, near the end, [[spoiler:there's some J.E.N.O.V.A. mixed in, as well.]]
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Link to the creator page, not to a work for which they\'re known (and the link needed to be namespaced anyway). Don\'t shout the examples; one form of emphasis markup is enough. A single second-level bullet is always incorrect indentation.
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When your lyrics and music are composed by [[ShovelKnight Jake Kaufman]], you're bound to have a few winners.
* Their single, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H841uTdr5S0 "I'm The Boss"]], is a strong IAmSong, that gets right to the point; '''''they're the boss'''''.
* Their single, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H841uTdr5S0 "I'm The Boss"]], is a strong IAmSong, that gets right to the point; '''''they're the boss'''''.
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When your lyrics and music are composed by [[ShovelKnight Jake Kaufman]], Creator/JakeKaufman, you're bound to have a few winners.
winners.
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* Their single, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H841uTdr5S0 "I'm The Boss"]], is a strong IAmSong, that gets right to the point;'''''they're '''they're the boss'''''.boss'''.
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* Their single, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H841uTdr5S0 "I'm The Boss"]], is a strong IAmSong, that gets right to the point;
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/bears-and-birds-feat-grant-kirkhope "Bears and Birds"]], preformed by ''Grant freakin' Kirkhope''. It's a huge ShoutOut to almost every song he's composed, and the chorus is a BadassBoast to rival the ones found in "I'm The Boss"!
** Even cooler? They released a [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/bears-and-birds-radio-edit-feat-grant-kirkhope safe for work version]], too!
* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/minions-feat-dale-north "Minions"]] is a surprisingly [[HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming]]/TearJerker song about how the villains don't ''want'' their minions to die, but in order to take over the world, they feel it's their only choice. [[spoiler:A minion, played by Dale North, says that he ''knows'' he's going to die, but he does it for his boss]].
** Even cooler? They released a [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/bears-and-birds-radio-edit-feat-grant-kirkhope safe for work version]], too!
* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/minions-feat-dale-north "Minions"]] is a surprisingly [[HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming]]/TearJerker song about how the villains don't ''want'' their minions to die, but in order to take over the world, they feel it's their only choice. [[spoiler:A minion, played by Dale North, says that he ''knows'' he's going to die, but he does it for his boss]].
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/bears-and-birds-feat-grant-kirkhope "Bears and Birds"]], preformed by ''Grant freakin' Kirkhope''. It's a huge ShoutOut to almost every song he's composed, and the chorus is a BadassBoast to rival the ones found in "I'm The Boss"!
**Boss"! Even cooler? They released a [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/bears-and-birds-radio-edit-feat-grant-kirkhope safe for work version]], too!
* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/minions-feat-dale-north "Minions"]] is a surprisingly[[HeartwarmingMoments [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming]]/TearJerker song about how the villains don't ''want'' their minions to die, but in order to take over the world, they feel it's their only choice. [[spoiler:A minion, played by Dale North, says that he ''knows'' he's going to die, but he does it for his boss]].
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/minions-feat-dale-north "Minions"]] is a surprisingly
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/minions-feat-dale-north "Minions"]] is a surprisingly {{Heartwarming}}/TearJerker song about how the villains don't ''want'' their minions to die, but in order to take over the world, they feel it's their only choice. [[spoiler:A minion, played by Dale North, says that he ''knows'' he's going to die, but he does it for his boss]].
* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/another-villiain "Another Villiain" (sic)]]. [[spoiler:Remember when they said they had cameos from other singers? Well, they're all in this one song! An upbeat Broadway-esque number, with a nice dose of NiceJobBreakingItHeros.]]
* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/another-villiain "Another Villiain" (sic)]]. [[spoiler:Remember when they said they had cameos from other singers? Well, they're all in this one song! An upbeat Broadway-esque number, with a nice dose of NiceJobBreakingItHeros.]]
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/minions-feat-dale-north "Minions"]] is a surprisingly {{Heartwarming}}/TearJerker [[HeartwarmingMoments Heartwarming]]/TearJerker song about how the villains don't ''want'' their minions to die, but in order to take over the world, they feel it's their only choice. [[spoiler:A minion, played by Dale North, says that he ''knows'' he's going to die, but he does it for his boss]].
* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/another-villiain "Another Villiain" (sic)]]. [[spoiler:Remember when they said they had cameos from other singers? Well, they're all in this one song! An upbeat Broadway-esque number, with a nice dose ofNiceJobBreakingItHeros.NiceJobBreakingItHero.]]
* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/another-villiain "Another Villiain" (sic)]]. [[spoiler:Remember when they said they had cameos from other singers? Well, they're all in this one song! An upbeat Broadway-esque number, with a nice dose of
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/capture-you "Capture You"]], a very smooth AntiLoveSong, about Ganondorf [[spoiler:wanting to bang Link]].
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/bears-and-birds-feat-grant-kirkhope "Bears and Birds"]], preformed by ''Grant freakin' Kirkhope''. It's a huge ShoutOut to almost every song he's composed, and the chorus is a BadassBoast to rival the ones found in "I'm The Boss"!
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/bears-and-birds-feat-grant-kirkhope "Bears and Birds"]], preformed by ''Grant freakin' Kirkhope''. It's a huge ShoutOut to almost every song he's composed, and the chorus is a BadassBoast to rival the ones found in "I'm The Boss"!Boss"!
** Even cooler? They released a [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/bears-and-birds-radio-edit-feat-grant-kirkhope safe for work version]], too!
* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/minions-feat-dale-north "Minions"]] is a surprisingly {{Heartwarming}}/TearJerker song about how the villains don't ''want'' their minions to die, but in order to take over the world, they feel it's their only choice. [[spoiler:A minion, played by Dale North, says that he ''knows'' he's going to die, but he does it for his boss]].
* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/another-villiain "Another Villiain" (sic)]]. [[spoiler:Remember when they said they had cameos from other singers? Well, they're all in this one song! An upbeat Broadway-esque number, with a nice dose of NiceJobBreakingItHeros.]]
** Even cooler? They released a [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/bears-and-birds-radio-edit-feat-grant-kirkhope safe for work version]], too!
* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/minions-feat-dale-north "Minions"]] is a surprisingly {{Heartwarming}}/TearJerker song about how the villains don't ''want'' their minions to die, but in order to take over the world, they feel it's their only choice. [[spoiler:A minion, played by Dale North, says that he ''knows'' he's going to die, but he does it for his boss]].
* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/another-villiain "Another Villiain" (sic)]]. [[spoiler:Remember when they said they had cameos from other singers? Well, they're all in this one song! An upbeat Broadway-esque number, with a nice dose of NiceJobBreakingItHeros.]]
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/bears-and-birds-feat-grant-kirkhope "Bears and Birds"]], preformed by ''Grand freakin' Kirkhope''. It's a huge ShoutOut to almost every song he's composed, and the chorus is a BadassBoast to rival the ones found in "I'm The Boss"!
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/bears-and-birds-feat-grant-kirkhope "Bears and Birds"]], preformed by ''Grand ''Grant freakin' Kirkhope''. It's a huge ShoutOut to almost every song he's composed, and the chorus is a BadassBoast to rival the ones found in "I'm The Boss"!
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/bears-and-birds-feat-grant-kirkhope "Bears and Birds"], preformed by ''Grand freakin' Kirkhope''. It's a huge ShoutOut to almost every song he's composed, and the chorus is a BadassBoast to rival the ones found in "I'm The Boss"!
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/bears-and-birds-feat-grant-kirkhope "Bears and Birds"], Birds"]], preformed by ''Grand freakin' Kirkhope''. It's a huge ShoutOut to almost every song he's composed, and the chorus is a BadassBoast to rival the ones found in "I'm The Boss"!
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/angel "Angel"]], that starts out as a generic club song, then [[spoiler:suddenly cuts to a dubstep version of "One-Winged Angel"!]]
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* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/angel "Angel"]], that starts out as a generic club song, then [[spoiler:suddenly cuts to [[spoiler:during the chorus, it suddenly becombs a dubstep version of "One-Winged Angel"!]]Angel"!]]
* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/the-raid "The Raid"]], a great dance track lead by Bowser.
* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/bears-and-birds-feat-grant-kirkhope "Bears and Birds"], preformed by ''Grand freakin' Kirkhope''. It's a huge ShoutOut to almost every song he's composed, and the chorus is a BadassBoast to rival the ones found in "I'm The Boss"!
* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/the-raid "The Raid"]], a great dance track lead by Bowser.
* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/bears-and-birds-feat-grant-kirkhope "Bears and Birds"], preformed by ''Grand freakin' Kirkhope''. It's a huge ShoutOut to almost every song he's composed, and the chorus is a BadassBoast to rival the ones found in "I'm The Boss"!
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When your music is composed by [[ShovelKnight Jake Kaufman]], you're bound to have a few winners.
* Their single, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H841uTdr5S0 "I'm The Boss"]], is a strong IAmSong, that gets right to the point; '''''they're the boss'''''.
* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/angel "Angel"]], that starts out as a generic club song, then [[spoiler:suddenly cuts to a dubstep version of "One-Winged Angel"!]]
* Their single, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H841uTdr5S0 "I'm The Boss"]], is a strong IAmSong, that gets right to the point; '''''they're the boss'''''.
* [[https://bigbadbosses.bandcamp.com/track/angel "Angel"]], that starts out as a generic club song, then [[spoiler:suddenly cuts to a dubstep version of "One-Winged Angel"!]]
