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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oxp4X59LoIY EXEC_HARMONIOUS/.]] accomplishes its role as a final battle time wonderfully by being not only intense, but also for its beautiful opening segment that reflects the pure heart Mir used to have so long ago, and which Misha insistently sings backs to her, which like stated in the lyrics, she won't stop singing it no matter how much Mir may try to torment her, and the fact that it foreshadows the plot for the second game.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oxp4X59LoIY EXEC_HARMONIOUS/.]] accomplishes its role as a final battle time wonderfully not only by being not only intense, but also for by its beautiful opening segment that reflects the pure heart Mir used to have so long ago, and which Misha insistently sings backs back to her, which like her; as stated in the lyrics, she won't stop singing it no matter how much Mir may try to torment her, and the fact that it foreshadows the plot for the second game.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fkwxFrqYp0c EXEC_SUSPEND/.]] for when Shurelia makes her last-ditch effort at stopping Mir by shutting down the entire Tower. Its mournful, melancholy tune is almost a funeral dirge in showcasing that she really has reached the end of her rope.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oxp4X59LoIY EXEC_HARMONIOUS/.]] accomplishes its role as a final battle time wonderfully by being not only intense, but also for its beautiful opening segment that reflects the pure heart Mir used to have so long ago, and which Misha insistently sings backs to her, which like stated in the lyrics, she won't stop singing it no matter how much Mir may try to torment her, and the fact that it foreshadows the plot for the second game.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fkwxFrqYp0c EXEC_SUSPEND/.]] for when Shurelia makes her last-ditch effort at stopping Mir byshutting down putting the entire Tower. Tower into sleep mode. Its mournful, melancholy tune is almost a funeral dirge in showcasing that she really has reached the end of her rope.rope, the undertone being accurate to its in-universe role of being a rearrangement from the melody of an ancient Moon Chanter requiem, and the fact that the Song in itself is designed to be used only for Administrator replacements, a procedure that will kill off the old Administrator if it's carried out.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fkwxFrqYp0c EXEC_SUSPEND/.]] for when Shurelia makes her last-ditch effort at stopping Mir by
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!!All of the hymmnos songs are fantastic, but there are a few that definitely stand out above the rest:
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* Special mention to the ending song, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YWKSfdo9DT8 EXEC_PHANTASMAGORIA/.]], which features all three heroines Singing to convey the hopes and wishes of everyone living on Sol Ciel to the world, and is over ''eight minutes long''!
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* Special mention to the ending song, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YWKSfdo9DT8 EXEC_PHANTASMAGORIA/.]], which features all three heroines Singing singing to convey the hopes and wishes of everyone living on Sol Ciel to the world, and is over ''eight minutes long''!
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!!All of the hymmnos songs are fantastic, but there are a few that definitely stand out above the rest:
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u1GtMiKXE_E EXEC_CHRONICLE_KEY/.]] is a fan favorite and regarded as Misha's best Song since Akiko Shikata frankly knocks the emotions it carries out of the park.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fkwxFrqYp0c EXEC_SUSPEND/.]] for when Shurelia makes her last-ditch effort at stopping Mir by shutting down the entire Tower. Its mournful, melancholy tune is almost a funeral dirge in showcasing that she really has reached the end of her rope.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mQzjIO4OZO4 EXEC_RE=NATION/.]] is the opposite to EXEC_SUSPEND as it is what Aurica Sings to restart the Tower even though the underlying problem is still present. It conveys a hopeful image akin to waking up to a snowy winter morning, but seeing the first signs of a blooming spring just over the horizon.
* Special mention to the ending song, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YWKSfdo9DT8 EXEC_PHANTASMAGORIA/.]], which features all three heroines Singing to convey the hopes and wishes of everyone living on Sol Ciel to the world, and is over ''eight minutes long''!
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u1GtMiKXE_E EXEC_CHRONICLE_KEY/.]] is a fan favorite and regarded as Misha's best Song since Akiko Shikata frankly knocks the emotions it carries out of the park.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fkwxFrqYp0c EXEC_SUSPEND/.]] for when Shurelia makes her last-ditch effort at stopping Mir by shutting down the entire Tower. Its mournful, melancholy tune is almost a funeral dirge in showcasing that she really has reached the end of her rope.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mQzjIO4OZO4 EXEC_RE=NATION/.]] is the opposite to EXEC_SUSPEND as it is what Aurica Sings to restart the Tower even though the underlying problem is still present. It conveys a hopeful image akin to waking up to a snowy winter morning, but seeing the first signs of a blooming spring just over the horizon.
* Special mention to the ending song, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YWKSfdo9DT8 EXEC_PHANTASMAGORIA/.]], which features all three heroines Singing to convey the hopes and wishes of everyone living on Sol Ciel to the world, and is over ''eight minutes long''!
