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--> '''Dee Jay:''' Ah man! Now this is bullshit! How in the world am I suppose to fight a guy the size of this, with four arms! This is sheer madness! Of all the bloody people to fight, why'd I get Kintaro?
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--> '''Dee Jay:''' Ah man! Now this is bullshit! How in the world am I suppose [sic] to fight a guy the size of this, with four arms! This is sheer madness! Of all the bloody people to fight, why'd I get Kintaro?
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* In one of the story's side-chapters, Eliza is in danger of AttemptedRape. Cue BigDamnHeroes moment by one ''very'' angry Ken, courtesy of the Alpha-Omega.
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* In one of the story's side-chapters, Eliza is in danger of AttemptedRape. Cue BigDamnHeroes moment by one ''very'' angry Ken, courtesy of the Alpha-Omega.