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* The twist a few pages later, with [[spoiler:[[http://riceboy.jho-tan.com/see/414.html the revelation of the identity of the true fulfiller: The One Electronic.]] ]]
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* The twist a few pages later, with [[spoiler:[[http://riceboy.[[http://riceboy.jho-tan.com/see/414.html the revelation of the identity of the true fulfiller: The One Electronic.]] ]]
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* Despite Gerund's earlier declaration of not being as war-like as the rest of his countrymen, his CharacterDevelopment shows him twice getting out of difficult situations by fighting against his oppressors.
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* Despite Gerund's [[BadassAdorable Ger]][[BigEater und]]'s earlier declaration of not being as war-like as the rest of his countrymen, his CharacterDevelopment shows him twice getting out of difficult situations by fighting against his oppressors.
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** During the final battle, Gerund ties a flag around his neck, picks up an axe and [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.php?c=382 starts chopping up enemies left and right]] with the rest of his countrymen rallied behind him to keep Rice Boy safe. [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.php?c=383 Here]], Gerund swears a DeclarationOfProtection to Rice Boy to get him to the Iron Tower.
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* Despite Gerund's earlier declaration of not being as war-like as the rest of his countrymen, his CharacterDevelopment shows him twice getting out of difficult situations by fighting against his oppressors.
** When he is separated from Rice Boy in the Lonely Land, he is captured by the natives to be fed to Father Dimmon, a large EldritchAbomination whose hands are nailed to the ground. Despite being restrained, after Gerund has one of his horns broken off, he [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.php?c=155 stabs one of his captors with the other horn]] and begins [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.php?c=156 tearing through all of them]]. Father Dimmon's despair at not getting a compliant meal is glorious to see, as Gerund simply walks away from the immobile monster.
** When he is separated from Rice Boy in the Lonely Land, he is captured by the natives to be fed to Father Dimmon, a large EldritchAbomination whose hands are nailed to the ground. Despite being restrained, after Gerund has one of his horns broken off, he [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.php?c=155 stabs one of his captors with the other horn]] and begins [[http://www.rice-boy.com/see/index.php?c=156 tearing through all of them]]. Father Dimmon's despair at not getting a compliant meal is glorious to see, as Gerund simply walks away from the immobile monster.
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** My personal favorite came a few pages later, with [[spoiler:[[http://riceboy.jho-tan.com/see/414.html the revelation of the identity of the true fulfiller.]] ]]
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