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* Episode 4, Nanoha and Fate's first confrontation is when the story shows its not just another textbook magical girl anime.
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* Episode 4, Nanoha and Fate's first confrontation is when the story shows its it's not just another textbook magical girl anime.
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--> '''Chrono''': (''catches Raging Heart and Bardiche mid-strike'') Stop it now! A battle here is just way to dangerous to allow. I'm with the Time Space Administration, Enforcer Chrono Harlaown. I want you to tell me what this is all about...
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--> '''Chrono''': (''catches Raging Heart and Bardiche mid-strike'') Stop it now! A battle here is just way to dangerous to allow. I'm with the Time Space Administration, Enforcer Chrono Harlaown. I want you to tell me what this is all about...
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* Let's start from the fact that Precia is the first Nanoha character to have an SS rank in the power scale. To put this in perspective. Nanoha and Fate are both AAA rank in the first season and that is the highest rank before the scale was updated. By the third season, the adult Nanoha and Fate are specialized S rank mages and still nowhere near Precia's ranking. Also, unlike Hayate who cheated her way up the power scale by assimilating the Book of Darkness/Tome of the Night sky, Precia's power is entirely natural implying Precia is, at least, in the same league as [[PhysicalGod Reinforce Eins.]]
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* Let's start from the fact that Precia is the first Nanoha character to have shown with an SS rank in the power scale. To put this in perspective.scale. Nanoha and Fate are both AAA rank in the first season and that is the highest rank before the scale was updated. By the third season, the adult Nanoha and Fate are specialized S rank mages and still nowhere near Precia's ranking. Also, unlike Hayate who cheated boosted her way up the power scale by assimilating the Book of Darkness/Tome of the Night sky, Precia's power is entirely natural implying Precia is, at least, in the same league as [[PhysicalGod Reinforce Eins.]]
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* Near the beginning of episode 2, Nanoha sealing a Jewel Seed for the very first time.
* Episode 4, Nanoha and Fate's first confrontation.
* Yuuno doesn't get many moments of awesome - he spends most of the series depowered by injuries incurred in the first episode - but we get a glimpse of just how broken a character he really is when in episode 5 he, while maintaining a phase shift barrier over roughly a kilometer area, throws up a defensive barrier that stops barrier-buster familiar Arf in her tracks, and then a short-distance teleport, all at the same time, in the space of about ten seconds, while depowered, deviceless and doing all of the highly advanced mathematics involved in the above with a brain the size of a walnut.
* While it also doubles as a bit of a TearJerker considering how desperate she seems at the time, and what [[AbusiveParents her mother does to her afterwards]], Fate managing to subdue an out-of-control Jewel Seed by herself, after Bardiche is damaged in her fight with Nanoha, at the start of episode 7 is pretty damn impressive.
* Episode 4, Nanoha and Fate's first confrontation.
* Yuuno doesn't get many moments of awesome - he spends most of the series depowered by injuries incurred in the first episode - but we get a glimpse of just how broken a character he really is when in episode 5 he, while maintaining a phase shift barrier over roughly a kilometer area, throws up a defensive barrier that stops barrier-buster familiar Arf in her tracks, and then a short-distance teleport, all at the same time, in the space of about ten seconds, while depowered, deviceless and doing all of the highly advanced mathematics involved in the above with a brain the size of a walnut.
* While it also doubles as a bit of a TearJerker considering how desperate she seems at the time, and what [[AbusiveParents her mother does to her afterwards]], Fate managing to subdue an out-of-control Jewel Seed by herself, after Bardiche is damaged in her fight with Nanoha, at the start of episode 7 is pretty damn impressive.
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* Near the beginning of episode Episode 2, Nanoha sealing a Jewel Seed for the very first time.
time shows her immense abilities.
* Episode 4, Nanoha and Fate's firstconfrontation.
* Yuuno doesn't get many moments of awesome - he spends most of the series depowered by injuries incurred in the first episode - but we get a glimpse of just how broken a character he reallyconfrontation is when in episode 5 he, while maintaining the story shows its not just another textbook magical girl anime.
* Episode 5, Yuuno simultaneously maintains a phase shift barrier over roughly a kilometer area, throws up a defensive barrier that stops barrier-buster familiar Arf in her tracks, and then a short-distanceteleport, all at the same time, teleport in the space of about ten seconds, while depowered, deviceless and doing all of the highly advanced mathematics involved in the above with a brain the size of a walnut.
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*While it also doubles Doubling as a bit of a TearJerker considering how desperate she seems at the time, and what [[AbusiveParents her mother does to her afterwards]], Fate managing to subdue an out-of-control Jewel Seed by herself, after Bardiche is damaged in her fight with Nanoha, at the start of episode 7 is pretty damn impressive.
* Episode 4, Nanoha and Fate's first
* Yuuno doesn't get many moments of awesome - he spends most of the series depowered by injuries incurred in the first episode - but we get a glimpse of just how broken a character he really
* Episode 5, Yuuno simultaneously maintains a phase shift barrier over roughly a kilometer area, throws up a defensive barrier that stops barrier-buster familiar Arf in her tracks, and then a short-distance
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** Thunder Rage.
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** Fate's Thunder Rage.Rage gets Nanoha gaping at her awesomeness.
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* No love for Arf? Even if she was beaten, her rampage against Precia to call on her for mistreating Fate is nothing short of awesome, the fury on her face, the SugarWiki/{{Heartwarming|Moments}} and [[BadassBoast courageous]] speech she gives to Precia about Fate's feelings, all while breaking into her magical shields in a way that would make the [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion EVA-01]] proud. The [[TheOriginalSeries original series]] version of this scene, on this troper's eyes, transformed Arf instantly from an arrogant beast who attempted to eat Nanoha into the most sympathetic antagonist of the season.
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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
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** The [[ShesBack moment when]] Fate does her HeelFaceTurn in the first season and [[RivalsTeamUp joins Nanoha against her]] EvilMatriarch mother definitely qualifies. She summons her cape from thin air over her head, and it proceeds to drop perfectly into place on her shoulders in mid-transformation without her moving an inch. And [[UpToEleven all of it set to]] ''[[SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic Take A Shot]]''.
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** The [[ShesBack moment when]] Fate does her HeelFaceTurn in the first season and [[RivalsTeamUp joins Nanoha against her]] EvilMatriarch mother definitely qualifies. She summons her cape from thin air over her head, and it proceeds to drop perfectly into place on her shoulders in mid-transformation without her moving an inch. And [[UpToEleven all of it set to]] to ''[[SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic Take A Shot]]''.
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* While it also doubles as a bit of a TearJerker considering how desperate she seems at the time, and what [[AbusiveParents her mother does to her afterwards]], Fate managing to subdue an out of control Jewel Seed by herself, after Bardiche is damaged in her fight with Nanoha, at the start of episode 7 is pretty damn impressive.
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* While it also doubles as a bit of a TearJerker considering how desperate she seems at the time, and what [[AbusiveParents her mother does to her afterwards]], Fate managing to subdue an out of control out-of-control Jewel Seed by herself, after Bardiche is damaged in her fight with Nanoha, at the start of episode 7 is pretty damn impressive.
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* Chrono's speech upon making his [[DungeonBypass entry]] to Precia's lair. Bleeding from the head, he nevertheless proceeds to tell her just exactly why she's a lunatic. This becomes much more of a TearJerker after you realize next season that Chrono speaks from the experience of losing his father.
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* Thunder Rage.
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* The [[ShesBack moment when]] Fate does her HeelFaceTurn in the first season and [[RivalsTeamUp joins Nanoha against her]] EvilMatriarch mother definitely qualifies. She summons her cape from thin air over her head, and it proceeds to drop perfectly into place on her shoulders in mid-transformation without her moving an inch. And [[UpToEleven all of it set to]] ''[[SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic Take A Shot]]''.
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* Chrono destroying Precia's welcoming committee.
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* Episode 12, Chrono destroying Precia's welcoming committee.
