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** When he gets back to Earth, in true Heinlein fashion, Kip denies doing anything heroic, chalking it up to luck and help from others. Pee Wee's dad sets him straight.
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** When he gets back to Earth, in true Heinlein fashion, [[HumbleHero Kip denies doing anything heroic, heroic]], chalking it up to luck and help from others. Pee Wee's dad sets him straight.
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** Not to mention how he deals with a wounded Wormface, ''squish''.
** And when he learns he's been given amnesty if they decide to destroy Earth, he insists on going back before they carry out the sentence.
** And when he learns he's been given amnesty if they decide to destroy Earth, he insists on going back before they carry out the sentence.
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** Not to mention how he Kip deals with a wounded Wormface, ''squish''.
** And whenhe Kip learns he's been given amnesty if they decide to destroy Earth, he insists on going back before they carry out the sentence.
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** Of course this all happens as Kip and Peewee cheer for him unashamedly.
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** Of course course, this all happens as Kip and Peewee cheer for him unashamedly.
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** And when he learns [[spoiler: he's been given amnesty if they decide to destroy Earth, he insists on going back before they carry out the sentence.]]
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** And when he learns [[spoiler: he's been given amnesty if they decide to destroy Earth, he insists on going back before they carry out the sentence.]]
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* The story finishes with [[spoiler: Kip [[FoodSlap throwing a milkshake in the local bully's face.]]]]
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* The story finishes with [[spoiler: Kip [[FoodSlap throwing a milkshake in the local bully's face.]]]]]]
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* The story finishes with [[spoiler: Kip [[FoodSlap throwing a milkshake in the local bully's face.]]
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* The story finishes with [[spoiler: Kip [[FoodSlap throwing a milkshake in the local bully's face.]]]]]]
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** He then goes the extra mile to get Oscar completely spaceworthy, even to the point of stocking the onboard first aid kit's drug supply..
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** He then goes the extra mile to get Oscar completely spaceworthy, space worthy, even to the point of stocking the onboard first aid kit's drug supply..supply.
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** Not to mention how he deals with a wounded Wormface, ''squesh''.
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** Not to mention how he deals with a wounded Wormface, ''squesh''.''squish''.
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** He then goes to extra effort to get Oscar completely spaceworthy, even to the point of stocking the onboard first aid kit.
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** He then goes to the extra effort mile to get Oscar completely spaceworthy, even to the point of stocking the onboard first aid kit.kit's drug supply..
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* [[BadassAdorable Mother Thing]], she didn't even bother wearing a spacesuit.
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** When he gets back to Earth, in true Heinlein fashion, Kip denies doing anything heroic, chalking it up to luck and help from others. Pee Wee's dad sets him straight.
* [[BadassAdorable Mother Thing]], she didn't even bother wearing aspacesuit.spacesuit when going out on Pluto's surface.
* [[BadassAdorable Mother Thing]], she didn't even bother wearing a
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* The Three Galaxies council asks who will 'speak' for humanity. Mother Thing speaks up (heartwarming, but no surprise.) Then a random creature, a sort of space-monkey, stands and says, essentially, "Their species seems immature, aggressive, and unpredictable. But so did mine once, and so did all of yours. I say they get their chance to grow up."
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* The Three Galaxies council asks who will 'speak' for humanity. Mother Thing speaks up (heartwarming, but no surprise.) Then a random creature, a sort of green space-monkey, stands and says, essentially, "Their species seems immature, aggressive, and unpredictable. But so did mine once, and so did all of yours. I say they get their chance to grow up."
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** As a first, relatively minor example, his efforts to win the Skyway Soap contest.
** He then goes to extra effort to get Oscar completely spaceworthy, even to the point of stocking the onboard first aid kit.
** Marching for forty miles across the Lunar surface, with Mother Thing riding piggyback inside his suit, while keeping Pee Wee going (and alive) despite her woefully inadequate tourist suit wins him full marks for effort, even if they do get recaptured at the end of the trek.
** He then goes to extra effort to get Oscar completely spaceworthy, even to the point of stocking the onboard first aid kit.
** Marching for forty miles across the Lunar surface, with Mother Thing riding piggyback inside his suit, while keeping Pee Wee going (and alive) despite her woefully inadequate tourist suit wins him full marks for effort, even if they do get recaptured at the end of the trek.
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* You've gotta love Centurion Iunio. The man is a total ass... but that's ''why'' you cheer for him. His shining moment comes when he loses his temper and lets his javelin fly. It missed of course, but it no doubt beat all the Olympic records.
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* You've gotta love Centurion Iunio. The man is a total ass... JerkAss, but that's ''why'' you cheer for him. His shining moment comes when he loses his temper and lets his javelin fly. It missed of course, but it no doubt beat all the Olympic records.
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--> '''Iunio''': [[DefiantToTheEnd Farewell, boy! They're cowards!]]
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--> '''Iunio''': (''[[NotSoAboveItAll spots the kids and smiles]]'') [[DefiantToTheEnd Farewell, boy! They're cowards!]]
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* Behold Clifford "Kip" Russell, TheDeterminator in it's finest form.
** Walking out into an impossibly cold Plutonian night and nearly freezing to near-death to try and retrive the Mother Thing and finish her task helps.
** Walking out into an impossibly cold Plutonian night and nearly freezing to near-death to try and retrive the Mother Thing and finish her task helps.
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* Behold Clifford "Kip" Russell, TheDeterminator in it's its finest form.
** Walking out into an impossibly cold Plutonian night and nearly freezing to near-death to try andretrive retrieve the Mother Thing and finish her task helps.
** Walking out into an impossibly cold Plutonian night and nearly freezing to near-death to try and
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* You've gotta love Centurion Iunio. The man is a total ass but you still cheer for him in the end. His shining moment comes when he loses his temper and lets his javelin fly. It missed of course, but it no doubt beat all the Olympic records.
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* You've gotta love Centurion Iunio. The man is a total ass ass... but that's ''why'' you still cheer for him in the end.him. His shining moment comes when he loses his temper and lets his javelin fly. It missed of course, but it no doubt beat all the Olympic records.
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** And if that quote didn't convince you how awesome he is, he says this little gem as he's about to be dragged away to, as he knows, a unknown fate, smiling all the while.
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--> '''Iunio''': Slit their throats as I bring them down, boy! There's work to be done!
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** And if that quote didn't convince you how awesome he is, he says this little gem as he's about to be being dragged away to, as he knows, a off to an unknown fate, fate[[labelnote:*]]Safe transport back to his own time, but ''he'' doesn't know that[[/labelnote]], smiling all the while.
--> '''Iunio''': Slit their throats as I bring them down, boy! There's work to be done!while.
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* Behold Clifford Kip Russell, TheDeterminator.
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* Behold Clifford Kip "Kip" Russell, TheDeterminator.TheDeterminator in it's finest form.
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--> '''Iunio''': [[DefiantToTheEnd Farewell, boy! They're cowards!cowards!]]
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* []BadassAdorable [[BadassAdorable Mother Thing]], she didn't even bother wearing a spacesuit.
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* Mother Thing, she didn't even bother wearing a spacesuit.
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* []BadassAdorable Mother Thing, Thing]], she didn't even bother wearing a spacesuit.
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* BEHOLD KIP TheDeterminator!
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* BEHOLD KIP TheDeterminator!Behold Clifford Kip Russell, TheDeterminator.
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* You've gotta love Centurion Iunio. The man is a total ass but you still cheer for him in the end. His shining moment comes when he loses his temper and lets his javelin fly. It missed of course, but it was still awesome!
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* You've gotta love Centurion Iunio. The man is a total ass but you still cheer for him in the end. His shining moment comes when he loses his temper and lets his javelin fly. It missed of course, but it was still awesome! no doubt beat all the Olympic records.
