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Incantatem''. Well, and a Transfiguration spell to turn part of its brain to acid.
** The RoaringRampageOfRevenge is a crowning moment for all three. Let's not forget that Fred and George managed to summon the Sorting Hat and pull out the ''[[CoolSword sword of Godric Griffindor]]''.
* The foundation of the Auxiliary Protective Special Committee in Chapter 98 is a crowning moment for each of the students and their sponsors, not just Harry. In fact, it might be Draco's first real [=CMoA=].
** The RoaringRampageOfRevenge is a crowning moment for all three. Let's not forget that Fred and George managed to summon the Sorting Hat and pull out the ''[[CoolSword sword of Godric Griffindor]]''.
* The foundation of the Auxiliary Protective Special Committee in Chapter 98 is a crowning moment for each of the students and their sponsors, not just Harry. In fact, it might be Draco's first real [=CMoA=].
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* Chapter 39: Dumbledore accuses Harry of wanting [[spoiler:the secret of the Dark Lord's immortality]] in order to use is for himself. Harry's response: "Wrong! I want [[spoiler:the secret of the Dark Lord's immortality]] in order to use it for ''everyone!''"
* Chapter 45: Harry [[spoiler: Kills a dementor. No, he does not drive it back, he KILLS IT, by completely rejecting what it symbolizes. His patronus is a ''Homo sapiens sapiens'', BTW.]] [[http://tindeck.com/listen/rdhu Cliffnotes of the awesome.]]
** [[spoiler: For every person that thought "boring cliche golden patronus, this sucks" upon reading this, give it a chance. It's AWESOME. It's awesomely justified, fits ''absolutely perfectly'' with the explanation given for dementors and simply '''rocks'''.]]
** [[spoiler: Merely a ''Homo sapiens sapiens''? This troper likes to think that Harry's patronus was the [[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}} God Emperor himself.]]]]
** [[spoiler: Don't forget that his HeroicWillpower is so strong that he eventually learns to ignore the dementor's negative emotions by himself- although he has a tough time telling the difference between artificially-induced self-doubt and the rational realization that something is a bad idea.]]
* Chapter 45: Harry [[spoiler: Kills a dementor. No, he does not drive it back, he KILLS IT, by completely rejecting what it symbolizes. His patronus is a ''Homo sapiens sapiens'', BTW.]] [[http://tindeck.com/listen/rdhu Cliffnotes of the awesome.]]
** [[spoiler: For every person that thought "boring cliche golden patronus, this sucks" upon reading this, give it a chance. It's AWESOME. It's awesomely justified, fits ''absolutely perfectly'' with the explanation given for dementors and simply '''rocks'''.]]
** [[spoiler: Merely a ''Homo sapiens sapiens''? This troper likes to think that Harry's patronus was the [[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}} God Emperor himself.]]]]
** [[spoiler: Don't forget that his HeroicWillpower is so strong that he eventually learns to ignore the dementor's negative emotions by himself- although he has a tough time telling the difference between artificially-induced self-doubt and the rational realization that something is a bad idea.]]
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* Chapter 39: Dumbledore accuses Harry of wanting [[spoiler:the secret of the Dark Lord's immortality]] in order to use is it for himself. Harry's response: "Wrong! I want [[spoiler:the secret of the Dark Lord's immortality]] in order to use it for ''everyone!''"
* Chapter 45: Harry[[spoiler: Kills [[spoiler:kills a dementor. No, he does not drive it back, he KILLS IT, by completely rejecting what it symbolizes. His patronus is a ''Homo sapiens sapiens'', BTW.]] [[http://tindeck.com/listen/rdhu Cliffnotes of the awesome.]]
**[[spoiler: For [[spoiler:For every person that thought "boring cliche golden patronus, this sucks" upon reading this, give it a chance. It's AWESOME. It's awesomely justified, fits ''absolutely perfectly'' with the explanation given for dementors dementors, and simply '''rocks'''.]]
**[[spoiler: Merely [[spoiler:Merely a ''Homo sapiens sapiens''? This troper likes to think that Harry's patronus was the [[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}} God Emperor himself.]]]]
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* Chapter 78. [[spoiler: The Dragon [[spoiler:Dragon Army]] literally defeats the [[spoiler:Chaos Legion]] at their own game. How? [[spoiler:"NOW!" bellowed Dean Thomas... "DO WHATEVER THEY DO!"]]
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* Chapter 86. Harry Potter vs Alastor Moody.
-->"Really, boy?" said Mad-Eye Moody, his blue eye spinning rapidly. "I'd say that's a little... ''paranoid''."
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* In Chapter 10, the raised by rationalist/scientist Harry meets the first challenge that is able to seriously oppose him mentally, [[spoiler:the Sorting Hat. Why? Because the Sorting Hat runs off the consciousness of the person who wears it, meaning that the Hat has all of his smarts but retains its own goals.]] The resultant battle of wits has to be seen to be believed, being both tense, intelligent, and hilarious. The crowning moment of the scene is [[spoiler:the Hat's last laugh, where even after failing to convince Harry to join Hufflepuff or Gryffindor, briefly declares him Slytherin before saying "kidding, Ravenclaw". This finally gets through to Harry the danger he incurs by relying excessively on his intellect without any consideration to his or other's wellbeings, and ensures that his stay in Ravenclaw will be properly tempered.]]
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** [[spoiler: For every person that thought "boring cliche golden patronus, this sucks" upon reading this, give it a chance. It's FUCKING AWESOME. It's awesomely justified, fits ''absolutely perfectly'' with the explanation given for dementors and simply '''rocks'''.]]
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* While this fic has its fair share of {{Take That}}s toward the original canon, Quirrel's first Defense lecture retroactively awards a Crowning Moment of Awesome to Harry, Ron, and Hermione Hermione's defeat of a mountain troll in ''The Philosopher's Stone''. During the lecture, Quirrel claims that mountain trolls are far, ''far'' more dangerous than ''Hungarian Horntails''.
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* In defense against the Dark Arts Class, Quirrel tells Harry that he must shoot somebody with a hex, or else he would deduct house points. Rather than prove Quirrel right that Harry has a killing instinct, Harry shoots himself.
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** What with the author's confessed fondness for a [[DeathNote Certain Japanese Franchise]]. This troper prefers to read this as: the Dark Lord took a cookie. AND HE ATE IT!
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* In chapter 81, Harry [[spoiler:forces Lucius' hand by calling in his blood debt for killing Voldemort, [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming accepts the extra 100,000 galleon fee without hesitation]], swears to destroy Azkaban (which makes Dumbledore back down and enlightens the Wizengamot as to who they're dealing with),]] and forces a Dementor to flee into a corner ''without'' casting a Patronus Charm.
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* In chapter 81, Harry [[spoiler:forces Lucius' hand by calling in his blood debt for killing Voldemort, [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming accepts the extra 100,000 galleon fee without hesitation]], swears to destroy Azkaban (which makes Dumbledore back down and enlightens the Wizengamot as to who they're dealing with),]] and forces a Dementor to flee into a corner ''without'' casting a Patronus Charm.
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* Tracy channeling Harry Potter's powers and gluing a large group of bullies to the ceiling. It's safe to say that anyone connected to Harry Potter should not be messed with.
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* [[spoiler: The Dragon Army defeats the Chaos Legion at their own game.]]
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** Hermione notes that it's a good deal less impressive if you've [[StarWars seen certain movies]], but it was still ''very'' impressive.
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* Tracy channeling Harry Potter's powers and gluing a large group of bullies to the ceiling. It's safe to say that anyone connected to Harry Potter should not be fucked with.
* Tracy channeling Harry Potter's powers and gluing a large group of bullies to the ceiling. It's safe to say that anyone connected to Harry Potter should not be fucked with.
