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* Boxxy's fight against Theresa the Goddess of the Hammer. They are a monster who hasn't even reached level 100 yet, she can throw instakill thunderbolts that cannot be dodged. What does the chest do? Hides inside its own storage, withstanding all the pain from the damage that such contradiction would cause. It does this not only once, or twice, but three times and on the last one it summons and throws Kora at the Goddess, who is so surprised that she doesn't dodge in time and ends up with a bloody nose.
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* Boxxy's fight against Theresa the Goddess of the Hammer. They are Boxxy is a monster who hasn't even reached level 100 yet, she can throw instakill thunderbolts that cannot be dodged. What does the chest do? Hides inside its own storage, withstanding all the pain from the damage that such contradiction would cause. It does this not only once, or twice, but three times and on the last one it summons and throws Kora at the Goddess, who is so surprised that she doesn't dodge in time and ends up with a bloody nose.
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* Boxxy's fight against Theresa the Goddess of the Hammer. They are a monster who hasn't even reached level 100 yet, she can throw instakill thunderbolts that cannot be dodged. What does the chest do? Hides inside Their own storage, withstanding all the pain from the damage that such contradiction would cause. They does this not only once, or twice, but three times and on the last one he summons and throws Kora at the Goddess, who is so surprised that she doesn't dodge in time and ends up with a bloody nose.
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* Boxxy's fight against Theresa the Goddess of the Hammer. They are a monster who hasn't even reached level 100 yet, she can throw instakill thunderbolts that cannot be dodged. What does the chest do? Hides inside Their its own storage, withstanding all the pain from the damage that such contradiction would cause. They It does this not only once, or twice, but three times and on the last one he it summons and throws Kora at the Goddess, who is so surprised that she doesn't dodge in time and ends up with a bloody nose.
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* Boxxy's fight against Theresa the Goddess of the Hammer. They is a monster who hasn't even reached level 100 yet, she can throw instakill thunderbolts that cannot be dodged. What does the chest do? Hides inside Their own storage, withstanding all the pain from the damage that such contradiction would cause. They does this not only once, or twice, but three times and on the last one he summons and throws Kora at the Goddess, who is so surprised that she doesn't dodge in time and ends up with a bloody nose.
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* Boxxy's fight against Theresa the Goddess of the Hammer. They is are a monster who hasn't even reached level 100 yet, she can throw instakill thunderbolts that cannot be dodged. What does the chest do? Hides inside Their own storage, withstanding all the pain from the damage that such contradiction would cause. They does this not only once, or twice, but three times and on the last one he summons and throws Kora at the Goddess, who is so surprised that she doesn't dodge in time and ends up with a bloody nose.
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Changed line(s) 6 (click to see context) from:
* Boxxy's fight against Theresa the Goddess of the Hammer. He is a monster who hasn't even reached level 100 yet, she can throw instakill thunderbolts that cannot be dodged. What does the chest do? Hides inside his own storage, withstanding all the pain from the damage that such contradiction would cause. He does this not only once, or twice, but three times and on the last one he summons and throws Kora at the Goddess, who is so surprised that she doesn't dodge in time and ends up with a bloody nose.
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* Boxxy's fight against Theresa the Goddess of the Hammer. He They is a monster who hasn't even reached level 100 yet, she can throw instakill thunderbolts that cannot be dodged. What does the chest do? Hides inside his Their own storage, withstanding all the pain from the damage that such contradiction would cause. He They does this not only once, or twice, but three times and on the last one he summons and throws Kora at the Goddess, who is so surprised that she doesn't dodge in time and ends up with a bloody nose.
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* Boxxy's fight against Theresa the Goddess of the Hammer. He is a monster who hasn't even reached level 100 yet, she can throw instakill thunderbolts that cannot be dodged. What does the chest do? Hides inside his own storage, withstanding all the pain from the damage that such contradiction would cause. He does this not only once, or twice, but three times and on the last one he summons and throws Kora at the Goddess, who is so surprised that she doesn't dodge in time and ends up with a bloody nose.
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* Boxxy's fight against Theresa the Goddess of the Hammer. He is a monster who hasn't even reached level 100 yet, she can throw instakill thunderbolts that cannot be dodged. What does the chest do? Hides inside his own storage, withstanding all the pain from the damage that such contradiction would cause. He does this not only once, or twice, but three times and on the last one he summons and throws Kora at the Goddess, who is so surprised that she doesn't dodge in time and ends up with a bloody nose.nose.
* When Boxxy's waylaid by TheSyndicate, it happily goes along with the idea - playing the part of Keira to the hilt and so confusing the other Doppelgangers that, for some time, they're genuinely unsure as to whether or not they really have the right person. It's only when the subordinate tries to cut off an ear that Boxxy finally gives up the act, and treats Reggie to his first glimpse of what a ''true'' shapeshifting monster is capable of.
* When Boxxy's waylaid by TheSyndicate, it happily goes along with the idea - playing the part of Keira to the hilt and so confusing the other Doppelgangers that, for some time, they're genuinely unsure as to whether or not they really have the right person. It's only when the subordinate tries to cut off an ear that Boxxy finally gives up the act, and treats Reggie to his first glimpse of what a ''true'' shapeshifting monster is capable of.
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* The summary of the story makes the reader think its a standard dungeon crawl adventure with a young male protagonist. The first chapter confirms this by introducing Himmel, a young adventurer attempting to reach level 5. Until the treasure chest he was approaching comes to life, eats him in three bites and gains a level, becoming a level 2 mimic.
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* The summary author has many of these:
** He constantly pulls BaitAndSwitch on readers who are aware that he likes doing it and are on guard against this.
** The lead up to the appearance of thestory makes God of Chaos, during which the reader think its names of the chapters changed daily, representing the God's nature
** Publishing 4.000 word chapters almost daily for multiple months.
* Keira's Clash of Fate against the Hero of the Hammer. After analyzing his fighting style, she invokes the sacred duel and proceeds to utterly dominate the fight using only her saber, at the same time she delivered astandard dungeon crawl adventure with speech on why the Hero never had a young male protagonist. chance against her. The first chapter voice of the world confirms this her dominance by introducing Himmel, announcing a young adventurer attempting to reach flawless victory.
* Boxxy's fight against Theresa the Goddess of the Hammer. He is a monster who hasn't even reached level5. Until 100 yet, she can throw instakill thunderbolts that cannot be dodged. What does the treasure chest he was approaching comes to life, eats him in do? Hides inside his own storage, withstanding all the pain from the damage that such contradiction would cause. He does this not only once, or twice, but three bites times and gains on the last one he summons and throws Kora at the Goddess, who is so surprised that she doesn't dodge in time and ends up with a level, becoming a level 2 mimic.bloody nose.
** He constantly pulls BaitAndSwitch on readers who are aware that he likes doing it and are on guard against this.
** The lead up to the appearance of the
** Publishing 4.000 word chapters almost daily for multiple months.
* Keira's Clash of Fate against the Hero of the Hammer. After analyzing his fighting style, she invokes the sacred duel and proceeds to utterly dominate the fight using only her saber, at the same time she delivered a
* Boxxy's fight against Theresa the Goddess of the Hammer. He is a monster who hasn't even reached level
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* The summary of the story makes the reader think its a standard dungeon crawl adventure with a young male protagonist. The first chapter confirms this by introducing Himmel, a young adventurer attempting to reach level 5. Until the treasure chest he was approaching comes to life, eats him in three bites and gains a level, becoming a level 2 mimic.
