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* For the villains, Henry Gates is [[KnightOfCerebus smart, ruthless, and not someone to take lightly]]. Despite the kids possessing the ability to manipulate time, Gates had everything else going for him, including taking Zak's father hostage and later managing to capture Zak and Francesca as well as ''recapture'' Dopler. The heroes are very lucky that Zak was able to access full hypertime, or Gates might have actually won.
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* For the villains, Henry Gates is [[KnightOfCerebus smart, ruthless, and not someone to take lightly]]. Despite the kids possessing the ability to manipulate time, Gates had everything else going for him, including taking Zak's father hostage and later managing to capture Zak and Francesca as well as ''recapture'' Dopler. The heroes are very lucky that Zak was able to access full hypertime, hyper-hypertime, or Gates might have actually won.
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** Related to the above: "Yeah, it ''hurts'', doesn't it?"
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** Related to Shortly after the above: [[BondOneLiner "Yeah, it ''hurts'', it]] ''[[BondOneLiner hurts]]''[[BondOneLiner , doesn't it?" it?"]]
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* For the villains, Henry Gates is smart, ruthless and not someone to take lightly. The fact that other than the kids possessing the ability to manipulate times. Gates had everything else going for him, including tacking Zak's father hostage. Later managing to capture, Zak, Francesca as well as ''recapturing'' Doppler. The heroes are very lucky that Zak was able to access "hypertime". Or Gates might have actually won.
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* For the villains, Henry Gates is [[KnightOfCerebus smart, ruthless ruthless, and not someone to take lightly. The fact that other than lightly]]. Despite the kids possessing the ability to manipulate times. time, Gates had everything else going for him, including tacking taking Zak's father hostage. Later hostage and later managing to capture, Zak, capture Zak and Francesca as well as ''recapturing'' Doppler. ''recapture'' Dopler. The heroes are very lucky that Zak was able to access "hypertime". Or full hypertime, or Gates might have actually won.
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** Related to the above: "Yeah, it ''hurts'', doesn't it?"
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** Related to the above: "Yeah, it ''hurts'', doesn't it?"it?"
* For the villains, Henry Gates is smart, ruthless and not someone to take lightly. The fact that other than the kids possessing the ability to manipulate times. Gates had everything else going for him, including tacking Zak's father hostage. Later managing to capture, Zak, Francesca as well as ''recapturing'' Doppler. The heroes are very lucky that Zak was able to access "hypertime". Or Gates might have actually won.
* For the villains, Henry Gates is smart, ruthless and not someone to take lightly. The fact that other than the kids possessing the ability to manipulate times. Gates had everything else going for him, including tacking Zak's father hostage. Later managing to capture, Zak, Francesca as well as ''recapturing'' Doppler. The heroes are very lucky that Zak was able to access "hypertime". Or Gates might have actually won.
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* The [[ChaseScene car chase!]]
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* The [[ChaseScene car chase!]]chase.]]
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* [[ChangedMyMindKid "Good night, little man!"]]man!"]]
* Related to the above: "Yeah, it ''hurts'', doesn't it?"
* Related to the above: "Yeah, it ''hurts'', doesn't it?"
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* The [[ChaseScene car chase!]]
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* The [[ChaseScene car chase!]]chase!]]
* [[ChangedMyMindKid "Goodnight, little man!"]]
* [[ChangedMyMindKid "Goodnight, little man!"]]
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* What's the first thing Zak does when he sees people moving around in his house (while he's still in hypertime)? [[ImprobableWeaponUser He goes straight for his baseball bat.]]
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* What's the first thing Zak does when he sees people moving around in his house (while he's still in hypertime)? [[ImprobableWeaponUser He goes straight for his baseball bat.]]]]
* The [[ChaseScene car chase!]]
* The [[ChaseScene car chase!]]
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* Zak's stunts while riding his bike in hypertime.
* What's the first thing Zak does when he sees people moving around in his house (while he's still in hypertime)? [[ImprobableWeaponUser He goes straight for his baseball bat.]]
* What's the first thing Zak does when he sees people moving around in his house (while he's still in hypertime)? [[ImprobableWeaponUser He goes straight for his baseball bat.]]
