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** A historical case turns out to have been a factor in the royal family's Grutrissheit going missing. A single Zent omitted to tell their heir that the item would [[spoiler:return to a location accessible only by those who have both royal blood and the standard qualifications to be Zent if its owner died]]. That information then proceeded to be irrelvant for long enough that a non-chosen potential heir got the idea that killing the item's owner to steal it was an option, when the now-unknown property of the item meant that doing this was never going to work unless specifically planned for.
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** A historical case turns out to have been a factor in the royal family's Grutrissheit going missing. A single Zent omitted to tell their heir that the item would [[spoiler:return to a location accessible only by those who have both royal blood and the standard qualifications to be Zent if its owner died]]. That information then proceeded to be irrelvant irrelevant for long enough that a non-chosen potential heir got the idea that killing the item's owner to steal it was an option, when the [[SuddenlySignificantRule now-unknown property of the item item]] meant that doing this was never going to work unless specifically planned for.
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Spelling/grammar fix(es), General clarification on work content
Changed line(s) 101 (click to see context) from:
** A historical case turns out to be a factor in the royal family's Grutrissheit going missing. A single Zent omitted to tell their heir that the item would [[spoiler:return to a hard-to-access location if its owner died]]. That information then proceeded to be irrelvant for long enough that a non-chosen potential heir got the idea that killing the item's owner to steal it was an option, when the now-unknown property of the item meant that doing this was never going to work unless specificall.
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** A historical case turns out to be have been a factor in the royal family's Grutrissheit going missing. A single Zent omitted to tell their heir that the item would [[spoiler:return to a hard-to-access location accessible only by those who have both royal blood and the standard qualifications to be Zent if its owner died]]. That information then proceeded to be irrelvant for long enough that a non-chosen potential heir got the idea that killing the item's owner to steal it was an option, when the now-unknown property of the item meant that doing this was never going to work unless specificall.specifically planned for.
