Archived Discussion

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From YKTTW Working Title: Time to Step Up Commander

Hylarn:Can someone trim the description down a bit?

Game Chainsaw: I had a go. I chopped out bits that repeat, a few areas that were of dubious value to the trope (or that probably belong in a yet-to-be-made trope) and shortened anything that could be said in fewer words. Its still long but hopefully there should be less blather and more substance.

Beyond that, we need a full re-write for conciseness. Anyone here a good summariser?