A caution to those interested in reading the story, as I might spoil a few plot points for you. The characters are really out of character, and the writing is rather flat. I admit it would be hard to explain Young Link and Link existing at the same time, but making them brothers seems... off. Also, it seems positively ridiculous to imagine that Link and Mario would be the first characters to be murdered so easily. That is just ... not right. Combined with the fact that the author tells us ahead of time that one of the murderers is an original character, and it sort of diminishes the fun of imagining a murder mystery among the smash bros cast. The idea of a murder mystery super smash bros story is something I really like, but I'm sort of sad to see this not living up to its potential.
FanficRecs A tad overhyped
A caution to those interested in reading the story, as I might spoil a few plot points for you. The characters are really out of character, and the writing is rather flat. I admit it would be hard to explain Young Link and Link existing at the same time, but making them brothers seems... off. Also, it seems positively ridiculous to imagine that Link and Mario would be the first characters to be murdered so easily. That is just ... not right. Combined with the fact that the author tells us ahead of time that one of the murderers is an original character, and it sort of diminishes the fun of imagining a murder mystery among the smash bros cast. The idea of a murder mystery super smash bros story is something I really like, but I'm sort of sad to see this not living up to its potential.