The story does not properly label when transition happens in a chapter so you often have to re-read a few paragraphs back once you realize that the scene does not make sense unless this is a different scene. This breaks the flow of the story. Events that could have been climaxes or resolutions are dealt with off screne in between chapters, not the most satisfying to end chapters. The son of Usagi does not get much of his personal life shown, such as who are his friends and such and his powers are not actually used despite the hype, very unsatisfying.
Ideas in the story are interesting and some twists are enjoyable, but overall appears to be poorly executed.
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The story does not properly label when transition happens in a chapter so you often have to re-read a few paragraphs back once you realize that the scene does not make sense unless this is a different scene. This breaks the flow of the story. Events that could have been climaxes or resolutions are dealt with off screne in between chapters, not the most satisfying to end chapters. The son of Usagi does not get much of his personal life shown, such as who are his friends and such and his powers are not actually used despite the hype, very unsatisfying.
Ideas in the story are interesting and some twists are enjoyable, but overall appears to be poorly executed.