Reviews: The Last Hurrah

This could be a novel

It certainly has an interesting plot. The reader can tell there's a lot of creativity and thought put into this, and if you like handy little gadgets and innovations, look no further.

Grammar, characterization, all that is done pretty well.

However, if you expect a lot of intense fighting between our dear mercs with lots of thrilling action, you may be a bit disappointed. Just saying.

For whatever reason, I feel like Pyro's characterization is a tad strange, but that's for the author to decide.
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