The relationships aren't in anyway explored which, for a shipping fic, is the whole reason you're reading. (Or my reason anyway) Harry somehow manages to be even blander than he was in Order of the Phoenix and all the women seem to just be slightly different iterations of the same over protective female prime.
YMMV but much of the allure of Harry Potter for me has always the level of independence each protagonist has. And absolutely none of that is here. Harry and Hermione run to their parents about everything. EVERYTHING. Long story short, Dumbledore is pure evil trying to lure Voldemort to Hogwarts (ignoring everything established in canon), Harry can't scrap his damn knee without his adoptive parents (who cares about the wards Lily bought with her life?) writing to the Daily Prophet and Hermione finally makes me hate her for being a stuck up know it all bitch.
This really isn't a shipping fic at all. It's a Fix Fic with a fair dose of character bashing. One of the chapters is even titled "Corrections"
The whole thing was a disappointment to read, honestly.
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The relationships aren't in anyway explored which, for a shipping fic, is the whole reason you're reading. (Or my reason anyway) Harry somehow manages to be even blander than he was in Order of the Phoenix and all the women seem to just be slightly different iterations of the same over protective female prime.
YMMV but much of the allure of Harry Potter for me has always the level of independence each protagonist has. And absolutely none of that is here. Harry and Hermione run to their parents about everything. EVERYTHING. Long story short, Dumbledore is pure evil trying to lure Voldemort to Hogwarts (ignoring everything established in canon), Harry can't scrap his damn knee without his adoptive parents (who cares about the wards Lily bought with her life?) writing to the Daily Prophet and Hermione finally makes me hate her for being a stuck up know it all bitch.
This really isn't a shipping fic at all. It's a Fix Fic with a fair dose of character bashing. One of the chapters is even titled "Corrections"
The whole thing was a disappointment to read, honestly.