While I've read a lot of HP fanfics over the years I have to say that this one does have some good writing. I also have to say that this is more than cancelled out by the MASSIVE amount of charcter bashing that occurs in the first chapter alone. Future!Harry shows up, does some cool magic and then proceeds to explain to Neville that he's come back from the Deathly Hallows compliant future where he is sleeping with Hermione(who is still maried to Ron), Ginny is a slut and "has to be the worst lay in the world" also blowing off Ron as stupid, useless, disloyal and disgusting. The author actually seems to hate Ginny to the point of having Future!Harry (the guy who married her) say that she repulses him and that "is single handedly responsible for keeping up moral during Seventh Year when the Carrows were running the school" (Copy/pasted directly from the story) and yes the author does mean in that way. All in all while the first few paragraphs are promising it so swiftly turn into a vitriolic character bashing rant that i couldn't get to the end of the second chapter or right around the point where the 60+ year old Future!Super!Harry has sex with the still 16 year old Hermione(who is perfectly cool with this) in order to destroy the soul fragment inside Harry's scar(it makes very little sense in context).
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While I've read a lot of HP fanfics over the years I have to say that this one does have some good writing. I also have to say that this is more than cancelled out by the MASSIVE amount of charcter bashing that occurs in the first chapter alone. Future!Harry shows up, does some cool magic and then proceeds to explain to Neville that he's come back from the Deathly Hallows compliant future where he is sleeping with Hermione(who is still maried to Ron), Ginny is a slut and "has to be the worst lay in the world" also blowing off Ron as stupid, useless, disloyal and disgusting. The author actually seems to hate Ginny to the point of having Future!Harry (the guy who married her) say that she repulses him and that "is single handedly responsible for keeping up moral during Seventh Year when the Carrows were running the school" (Copy/pasted directly from the story) and yes the author does mean in that way. All in all while the first few paragraphs are promising it so swiftly turn into a vitriolic character bashing rant that i couldn't get to the end of the second chapter or right around the point where the 60+ year old Future!Super!Harry has sex with the still 16 year old Hermione(who is perfectly cool with this) in order to destroy the soul fragment inside Harry's scar(it makes very little sense in context).