LuceMc
Since: Apr, 2019
05/01/2019 11:36:07
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FanficRecs Project Rewrite
The concept and plotting of the story is great and so are the murders, but a few things don't make sense like how Hinata remembers everything but doesn't use his "talents" for anything and is instead stuck with his baseline knowledge. The writing also isn't strong especially with the big plot twist near the end. I disagree with the previous review, I'd at most give the story a 6.5/10 and more likely a 6/10. It's ok, but nothing special.
FanficRecs Project Rewrite (spoilers) Every single time.
Every single time Komaeda is directly at fault for people dying. Every single time it’s either plotted to keep him out of harm’s way or something happens to keep him safe. Every single time he gets away mostly scotfree. Every single time I wonder if there wasn’t some other way for there to be conflict.