Unfortunately, this fanfic has a tendency to read like a modern kids' novelization (like the High School Musical
books and the Jedi Prince
series), but after a while, it gets intriguing. Certainly, having SG-1 influence the events of a MLP episode is a fun idea, and we get insight on what the other ponies were doing while "The Mare in the Moon" was taking place. Also, Apple Bloom, Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle all get named minutes after the point where we get a glimpse, so I'll definitely be interested in where they take that.