The idea is uniqe enough it could easily become its own book. furthermore, the writing style is overall engaging and interesting. But the author presents a mystery early on that can be vaguely summarised as 'what is connecting these characters, what does it mean, and why will nobody explain what it is?' which gradually begin to be addressed. And while it is understandable to avoid revealing the awnsers too soon to avoid overpowereded children ignoring the plot largely in an attempt to stick somewhat with canon, it becomes a case of sitting there just wanting to know what is is so you can decide whether you even want to keep reading. the build up goes on to the point where the resulting awnsers, while interesting, can not actually live up to the suspense. furthermore, fem-harry is a complete mary sue. while there are attempts made to make her a more rounded character emotionally, with some success, many important action scenes feel lacking because there are very few stakes beyond ones established in canon, and those stakes are often avoided or temporary.
FanficRecs Creative, well written, but poorly implemented.
The idea is uniqe enough it could easily become its own book. furthermore, the writing style is overall engaging and interesting. But the author presents a mystery early on that can be vaguely summarised as 'what is connecting these characters, what does it mean, and why will nobody explain what it is?' which gradually begin to be addressed. And while it is understandable to avoid revealing the awnsers too soon to avoid overpowereded children ignoring the plot largely in an attempt to stick somewhat with canon, it becomes a case of sitting there just wanting to know what is is so you can decide whether you even want to keep reading. the build up goes on to the point where the resulting awnsers, while interesting, can not actually live up to the suspense. furthermore, fem-harry is a complete mary sue. while there are attempts made to make her a more rounded character emotionally, with some success, many important action scenes feel lacking because there are very few stakes beyond ones established in canon, and those stakes are often avoided or temporary.