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The plot is good, and the concept is original. It would be a much better read if not for the terrible grammar, sentence structure, etc. If the mechanics were fixed, I would definitely recommend it.
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FanficRecs Good content, bad mechanics
The plot is good, and the concept is original. It would be a much better read if not for the terrible grammar, sentence structure, etc. If the mechanics were fixed, I would definitely recommend it.