Ok let me just start off by saying that this fic started off okay. The characterization was interesting and at the time the whole immortal!Naruto thing hadn't started annoying me.
Now let me say this is not a good fic. It is basically the journey of Overpowered!Gary Stu!Chick Magnet!Naruto stealing the Strawhat's spot light and basically being a creepy Twilight-esque immortal, that has built up a harem of every major female protagonist in the series made okay by the fact that every girl is okay with it because they 'love' him (there is some 'resistance' from Naruto, but it's obvious it's there to make Naruto out to be a 'good' guy). Every woman in his harem was an interesting character in their own right and they do get some interesting abilities due to Naruto's training but at this point they are just Tits&Ass there to pad Naruto's ego and make him more badass.
For a time the author tried to make Naruto out to be a man tortured by the fact that nearly everyone he knew and loved has been gone for a long time, but then Naruto quickly became a foul mouthed teenager that revels in using his god like strength to kill/beat into a coma anyone who pissed him off (even if all they did was talk in a way he disliked). This story barely has it's own story unless the Strawhats are involved. Naruto just sails directionless until the author finishes 1 or 2 filler chapters, then has Naruto and his not-pirate crew come in to the Straw Hat's journey to fight their battles for them (and maybe have his time with Nami and Robin since they stay with the Straw Hats and are basically Naruto's mistresses who he see's when he's tired of the normal harem).
I think I read up to the Thriller Bark chapter where Naruto somehow transforms both himself and the entirety of the Straw Hat's male crew into a giant mecha (no explanation as to how) after meeting Boa Hancock and gaining her 'attention' (which basically means she will most likely join the harem) and then proceeding to somehow defeat Bartholomew by transporting him to some unknown island.
Dont't read this story unless you like Naruto being a foul-mouthed, god-like, immortal, jokester that destroys all the good things about One Piece.
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Ok let me just start off by saying that this fic started off okay. The characterization was interesting and at the time the whole immortal!Naruto thing hadn't started annoying me.
Now let me say this is not a good fic. It is basically the journey of Overpowered!Gary Stu!Chick Magnet!Naruto stealing the Strawhat's spot light and basically being a creepy Twilight-esque immortal, that has built up a harem of every major female protagonist in the series made okay by the fact that every girl is okay with it because they 'love' him (there is some 'resistance' from Naruto, but it's obvious it's there to make Naruto out to be a 'good' guy). Every woman in his harem was an interesting character in their own right and they do get some interesting abilities due to Naruto's training but at this point they are just Tits&Ass there to pad Naruto's ego and make him more badass.
For a time the author tried to make Naruto out to be a man tortured by the fact that nearly everyone he knew and loved has been gone for a long time, but then Naruto quickly became a foul mouthed teenager that revels in using his god like strength to kill/beat into a coma anyone who pissed him off (even if all they did was talk in a way he disliked). This story barely has it's own story unless the Strawhats are involved. Naruto just sails directionless until the author finishes 1 or 2 filler chapters, then has Naruto and his not-pirate crew come in to the Straw Hat's journey to fight their battles for them (and maybe have his time with Nami and Robin since they stay with the Straw Hats and are basically Naruto's mistresses who he see's when he's tired of the normal harem).
I think I read up to the Thriller Bark chapter where Naruto somehow transforms both himself and the entirety of the Straw Hat's male crew into a giant mecha (no explanation as to how) after meeting Boa Hancock and gaining her 'attention' (which basically means she will most likely join the harem) and then proceeding to somehow defeat Bartholomew by transporting him to some unknown island.
Dont't read this story unless you like Naruto being a foul-mouthed, god-like, immortal, jokester that destroys all the good things about One Piece.