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Excellence Achieved
This fanfiction had what I was looking for. It tied together several plotlines from different routes in the VN quite expertly, and gave me a feeling of closure without finality. This is good, because while the ending of Hanako's route was nice, it was rather abrupt, and she develops more in Lilly's plotline. This continuation of the route fixes these issues, as well as other things like Hisao's lack of exercise and interest in science in non-Emi routes. This is just a matter of personal taste, but I like that this fanfiction didn't jump too far into the future. Definite endings, like the ones in Mehkanik's Epilogue series, depress me. This story had a great balance and let me remove the painful headcanon from the aforementioned epilogue and replace it with something nicer.
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Home run through and through
I myself have wondered if it was possible to combine the plot lines from several paths into a coherent story. This is my answer: Yes, it was. Same events, different lead ups and original ideas make this a home run. Barring the sex (due to my own weird thoughts and is in no way implying any shortcomings on the author's part), I've enjoyed the trip, finishing the series in one go. In one swop, 4 main characters had things going for them in the way they wanted. The "People, nothing more, nothing less" maxim came back to me. They fought the good fight, and came out better for it. Kudos.
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