This is a brilliant deconstruction story, that does most things right. Each time, it focuses on a protagonist from Friendship is Failure and deconstructs them. However, it makes some stuff up, like Fall of Starfleet, to make the characters worse. Fortunately, most of the time the retcons are better than the original plot.
My opinions on each:
Talon Ted had no major changes at all, except one that linked him to Miser. Thus, the accurate rant he got fits his canon counterpart.
Strings got a bit worse when it came to stalking, hurting others instead of just himself. Still mostly accurate.
Miser became quite competent, though he did get worse as well, trying to exploit and buy a country. While the demonization is there, his new arc is more interesting than the old one, which is good.
Manny Collars was the only one I disliked, because making someone a rapist to demonize them goes too far for me, even if the issue was treated with maturity.
Overall, a brilliant story.
Fanfic If you liked Fall of Starfleet, you will like this one as well
This is a brilliant deconstruction story, that does most things right. Each time, it focuses on a protagonist from Friendship is Failure and deconstructs them. However, it makes some stuff up, like Fall of Starfleet, to make the characters worse. Fortunately, most of the time the retcons are better than the original plot.
My opinions on each: Talon Ted had no major changes at all, except one that linked him to Miser. Thus, the accurate rant he got fits his canon counterpart. Strings got a bit worse when it came to stalking, hurting others instead of just himself. Still mostly accurate. Miser became quite competent, though he did get worse as well, trying to exploit and buy a country. While the demonization is there, his new arc is more interesting than the old one, which is good. Manny Collars was the only one I disliked, because making someone a rapist to demonize them goes too far for me, even if the issue was treated with maturity. Overall, a brilliant story.