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I honestly don\'t see how the hiding place used in canon is any worse than the one suggested here. Because honestly, the canon place did work. The only issue here is that no-one tried to hide the fact that they were taking Lupin there, allowing Snape to see him and leading to the subsequent mess.
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I honestly don\\\'t see how the hiding place used in canon is any worse than the one suggested here. Because in my opinion, the canon place did work. The only issue here is that no-one tried to hide the fact that they were taking Lupin there, allowing Snape to see him and leading to the subsequent mess.
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\'\'\'Instead:\'\'\' They either build or use a shack at the outskirts of the nearby village, make an underground tunnel leading there from the \'\'school grounds\'\' and plant a belligerent tree above the entrance to guard it, then bring the kid there without any concealment. It works for a while, in that it keeps Lupin inside, but it is still tremendously flawed, which leads to the following.\\\\
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\\\'\\\'\\\'Instead:\\\'\\\'\\\' They either build or use a shack at the outskirts of the nearby village, make an underground tunnel leading there from the \\\'\\\'school grounds\\\'\\\' and plant a belligerent tree above the entrance to guard it, then bring the kid there without any concealment. It works for a while, in that it keeps Lupin inside, but it is still tremendously flawed, which leads to the following.
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