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If all of a dragon\'s enemies are dead or too afraid of him to attack, then there is peace. That is how dragons define peace.
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If all of a dragon\\\'s enemies are dead(\\\'\\\'It was so very calming, to be \\\'\\\'\\\'done\\\'\\\'\\\' with an enemy.\\\'\\\') or too afraid of him to attack(\\\'\\\'it is our dangerousness, our peril to each other, that keeps each clan from another\\\'s throats.\\\'\\\'), then there is peace. That is how dragons define peace.
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Balance? Dragons\' Wings has Firebenders, Earthbenders, Waterbenders and a properly respectful and terrified colony of Airbenders right next to it. See, \
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Balance? Dragons\\\' Wings has Firebenders, Earthbenders, Waterbenders and a properly respectful and terrified colony of Airbenders right next to it. See, \\\"balance\\\".

I\\\'m not saying he\\\'ll absolutely do it, I\\\'m saying he would consider it if he knew it was an option.

And this steers away from: as a dragon, why doesn\\\'t Zuko see \\\'\\\'killing every single one of his enemies\\\'\\\' as one of the Fire Lord\\\'s plans? Hell, why was Shidan blind to it? \\\"No one can rule over ashes\\\", true. But no one is \\\'\\\'\\\'threatened\\\'\\\'\\\' by them, either.
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Balance? Dragons\\\' Wings has Firebenders, Earthbenders, Waterbenders and a properly respectful and terrified colony of Airbenders right next to it. See, \\\"balance\\\".
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And this steers away from: as a dragon, why doesn\'t Zuko see \'\'killing every single one of his enemies\'\' as one of the Fire Lord\'s plans? Hell, why was Shidan blind to it? \
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And this steers away from: as a dragon, why doesn\\\'t Zuko see \\\'\\\'killing every single one of his enemies\\\'\\\' as one of the Fire Lord\\\'s plans? Hell, why was Shidan blind to it? \\\"No one can rule over ashes\\\", true. But no one is \\\'\\\'\\\'threatened\\\'\\\'\\\' by them, either.
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I\'m not saying he\'ll absolutely do it, I\'m saying he would consider it if he knew it was an option.
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I\\\'m not saying he\\\'ll absolutely do it, I\\\'m saying he would consider it if he knew it was an option.

And this steers away from: as a dragon, why doesn\\\'t Zuko see \\\'\\\'killing every single one of his enemies\\\'\\\' as one of the Fire Lord\\\'s plans? Hell, why was Shidan blind to it? \\\"No one can rule over ashes\\\", true. But no one is \\\'\\\'\\\'threatened\\\'\\\'\\\' by them, either.
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