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OpeningACanOfClones seems... FITTING enough for Jade. I suggest Knowledge House for his relocation. Once that\'s done, go ahead and put Roy there. You\'ve made solid arguments why Roy should be there, and your preview\'s awesome (still wish you\'d put something about his TINY MINISKIRT obsession in flavor text, not just portfolio. I think the portfolio shouldn\'t be just \'tiny miniskirt\', Roy doesn\'t wear that, noooo. He wants girls under his command to wear such. Therefore, I think the fitting Portfolio would be \'Fetish on girls in TINY MINISKIRTS\'). Oh and take note on who used to deal with Jade in his days as the God of Colonels (I think Axel Almer was one of such), and readjust with Roy being the one in charge now.
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OpeningACanOfClones seems... FITTING enough for Jade. I suggest Knowledge House for his relocation. Once that\\\'s done, go ahead and put Roy here. You\\\'ve made solid arguments why Roy should be there, and your preview\\\'s awesome (still wish you\\\'d put something about his TINY MINISKIRT obsession in flavor text, not just portfolio. I think the portfolio shouldn\\\'t be just \\\'tiny miniskirt\\\', Roy doesn\\\'t wear that, noooo. He wants girls under his command to wear such. Therefore, I think the fitting Portfolio would be \\\'Fetish on girls in TINY MINISKIRTS\\\'). Oh and take note on who used to deal with Jade in his days as the God of Colonels (I think Axel Almer was one of such), and readjust with Roy being the one in charge now.
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OpeningACanOfClones seems... FITTING enough for Jade. I suggest Knowledge House for his relocation. Once that\'s done, go ahead and put Roy there. You\'ve made solid arguments why Roy should be there. Oh and take note on who used to deal with Jade in his days as the God of Colonels (I think Axel Almer was one of such), and readjust with Roy being the one in charge now.
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OpeningACanOfClones seems... FITTING enough for Jade. I suggest Knowledge House for his relocation. Once that\\\'s done, go ahead and put Roy there. You\\\'ve made solid arguments why Roy should be there, and your preview\\\'s awesome (still wish you\\\'d put something about his TINY MINISKIRT obsession in flavor text, not just portfolio. I think the portfolio shouldn\\\'t be just \\\'tiny miniskirt\\\', Roy doesn\\\'t wear that, noooo. He wants girls under his command to wear such. Therefore, I think the fitting Portfolio would be \\\'Fetish on girls in TINY MINISKIRTS\\\'). Oh and take note on who used to deal with Jade in his days as the God of Colonels (I think Axel Almer was one of such), and readjust with Roy being the one in charge now.
