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The opening line was being messed with, and last troper seems to have been banned for it. So I\'m here to propose before editing.
Instead of:\\\\
\'\'\'Describing an atomic explosion as being \
Instead of:\\\\
\'\'\'Describing an atomic explosion as being \
to:
You know what, leave it alone.
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\'\'\'Describing an atomic explosion as being \
to:
\\\'\\\'\\\'Describing an atomic explosion as being \\\"somewhat noisy.\\\"\\\'\\\'\\\'
\\\'\\\'\\\'A statement which, while technically accurate in a strictly literal sense, fails to convey the magnitude of the situation being described.\\\'\\\'\\\'
I suggest:\\\\\\\\
\\\'\\\'\\\'A statement which, while technically accurate in a strictly literal sense, fails to convey the magnitude of the situation being described. For example, describing an atomic explosion as being \\\"somewhat noisy\\\".\\\'\\\'\\\'
This way the arguments can have a logical connection, because as of now, the \\\"atomic explosion\\\" lines is adrift, out of place.
\\\'\\\'\\\'A statement which, while technically accurate in a strictly literal sense, fails to convey the magnitude of the situation being described.\\\'\\\'\\\'
I suggest:\\\\\\\\
\\\'\\\'\\\'A statement which, while technically accurate in a strictly literal sense, fails to convey the magnitude of the situation being described. For example, describing an atomic explosion as being \\\"somewhat noisy\\\".\\\'\\\'\\\'
This way the arguments can have a logical connection, because as of now, the \\\"atomic explosion\\\" lines is adrift, out of place.
