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Maybe I\'m splitting hairs here, but that seems more a trademark of his sarcastic and prankster sensibilities...calling Arthur \
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Maybe I\\\'m splitting hairs here, but that seems more a trademark of his sarcastic and prankster sensibilities...calling Arthur \\\"darling\\\" comes off more as him being condescending, the \\\"crossdressing\\\" is necessary to the plot, and the flirting with Saito just seemed like a bit of a joke, which then set up the semi-\\\"oh crap\\\" moment when Saito confused Dream-Peter Browning with Eames-Peter Browning. They all seemed perfunctory to the story rather then elements of a character...
Then again, this could just be a massive YourMileageMayVary, and me just being too pedantic.
Then again, this could just be a massive YourMileageMayVary, and me just being too pedantic.
