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antvasima
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\\\"Honestly, this felt more like a TrollFic than anything else. The author [[CanonDefilement played fast-and-loose with the setting]] [[DarkerAndEdgier and ripped away much of the intended \\\"be kind to others\\\" message of the original work]], [[PossessionSue the previously flawed but well-intentioned protagonists are drained of almost any redeeming features]] [[JerkSue they had in the original stories]], [[VillainSue whereas the nastiest are portrayed]] [[AcceptableHardluckTargets in a comparatively]] [[MoralDissonance disturbingly]] [[WhatIsEvil adulatory light]], [[DarknessInducedAudienceApathy to the extent that the reader easily loses interest in the cast as entertainment]], and the humour and story itself feels shallow, mechanical, heavy-handed, ruthlessly cynical, and overly reliant on cheap pop-culture references. Of course, YourMileageMayVary, and all of this may be entirely intentional caricaturisation of media conveniences, especially considering the recurring NoFourthWall narration. Basically if you aren\\\'t bothered by any of the above, then the writing quality is actually mostly decent, and if a reader is only familiar with the series from \\\"RanmaAbridged\\\" then he/she will probably enjoy this, as it entirely depends on if you have any actual affinity for the characters. I don\\\'t care at all about SailorMoon for example, and thus enjoyed that spinoff considerably better.\\\"
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\\\"Honestly, this felt more like a TrollFic than anything else. The author [[CanonDefilement played fast-and-loose with the setting]] [[DarkerAndEdgier and ripped away much of the intended \\\"be kind to others\\\" message of the original work]], [[PossessionSue the previously flawed but well-intentioned protagonists are drained of]] [[JerkSue any redeeming features they had in the original stories]], [[VillainSue whereas the nastiest are portrayed]] [[AcceptableHardluckTargets in a comparatively]] [[MoralDissonance disturbingly]] [[WhatIsEvil adulatory light]], [[DarknessInducedAudienceApathy to the extent that the reader easily loses interest in the cast as entertainment]], and the humour and story itself feels shallow, mechanical, heavy-handed, ruthlessly cynical, and overly reliant on cheap pop-culture references. Of course, YourMileageMayVary, and all of this may be entirely intentional caricaturisation of media conveniences, especially considering the recurring NoFourthWall narration. Basically if you aren\\\'t bothered by any of the above, then the writing quality is actually mostly decent, and if a reader is only familiar with the series from \\\"RanmaAbridged\\\" then he/she will probably enjoy this, as it entirely depends on if you have any actual affinity for the characters. I don\\\'t care at all about SailorMoon for example, and thus enjoyed that spinoff considerably better.\\\"
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I actually appreciate that you attempt to communicate civilly. The hostile misunderstandings, or false accusations, get very frustrating after a while. How about something like this then?
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I actually appreciate that you attempt to communicate civilly. The hostile misunderstandings, or false accusations, get very frustrating after a while. How about something like this then? Shorten down at will.
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\\\"Honestly, this felt more like a TrollFic than anything else. To be as brief as possible, the author [[CanonDefilement played fast-and-loose with the setting]] [[DarkerAndEdgier and ripped away much of the intended \\\"be kind to others\\\" message of the original work]], [[PossessionSue the previously flawed but well-intentioned protagonists are drained of]] [[JerkSue any redeeming features they had in the original stories]], [[VillainSue whereas the nastiest are portrayed]] [[AcceptableHardluckTargets in a comparatively]] [[MoralDissonance disturbingly]] [[WhatIsEvil adulatory light]], [[DarknessInducedAudienceApathy to the extent that the reader easily loses interest in the cast as entertainment]], and the humour and story itself feels shallow, mechanical, heavy-handed, ruthlessly cynical, and overly reliant on cheap pop-culture references. Of course, YourMileageMayVary, and all of this may be entirely intentional caricaturisation of media conveniences, especially considering the recurring NoFourthWall narration. Basically if you aren\\\'t bothered by any of the above, then the writing quality is actually mostly decent, and if a reader is only familiar with the series from \\\"RanmaAbridged\\\" then he/she will probably enjoy this, as it entirely depends on if you have any actual affinity for the characters. I don\\\'t care at all about SailorMoon for example, and thus enjoyed that spinoff considerably better.\\\"
