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Well you can rewrite it of course as the person who originally put these entries that\'s fine, but i\'d also say its fair to say that from an objective standpoint, Hiyoko did take the best approach in class 77 because remember prior to the seppuku he didn\'t show any remorse over Mahiru or even signs of changing so its rather weird that the class that condemned Nagito for 2-1 instantly forgave Fuyuhiko for a similar crime, of course if that\'s too YMMV rewrite it or delete it. As for it being biased i mean, Fuyuhiko is basically two different characters, the Fuyuhiko in the first two chapters who is intentionally written to be as unlikeable as possible and causes multiple deaths and the Fuyuhiko in the final four chapters that is written to be reliable and decent and atones for the person he was before, yeah there\'s negative tropes but that\'s because he did a lot of negative things, there\'s nothing that negative about him after chapter 2. You can tone it down if you want of course but i feel there should be some negative tropes here to balance out the positive and to highlight why he had a redemption arc in the first place.
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Well you can rewrite it of course as the person who originally put these entries that\\\'s fine, and i have removed only sane woman myself. As for it being biased i mean, Fuyuhiko is basically two different characters, the Fuyuhiko in the first two chapters who is intentionally written to be as unlikeable as possible and causes multiple deaths and the Fuyuhiko in the final four chapters that is written to be reliable and decent and atones for the person he was before, yeah there\\\'s negative tropes but that\\\'s because he did a lot of negative things, there\\\'s nothing that negative about him after chapter 2. You can tone it down if you want of course but i feel there should be some negative tropes here to balance out the positive and to highlight why he had a redemption arc in the first place. I have added some positive tropes myself just now.
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