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* ForegoneConclusion: Given that \'\'Roman Holiday\'\' is a prequel to \'\'RWBY\'\', anyone who\'s familiar with the show will already know that [[spoiler:Roman will become a wanted criminal and Neo will disown her Trivia identity after becoming a SelfMadeOrphan]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given that \\\'\\\'Roman Holiday\\\'\\\' is a prequel to \\\'\\\'RWBY\\\'\\\', anyone who\\\'s familiar with the show will already know that [[spoiler:Roman will become a wanted criminal after leaving the Spiders syndicate and Neo will disown her Trivia identity after becoming a SelfMadeOrphan]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given that \'\'Roman Holiday\'\' is a prequel to \'\'RWBY\'\', anyone who\'s familiar with the show will already know that [[spoiler:Roman will become a wanted criminal and Neo will disown her Trivia identity]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given that \\\'\\\'Roman Holiday\\\'\\\' is a prequel to \\\'\\\'RWBY\\\'\\\', anyone who\\\'s familiar with the show will already know that [[spoiler:Roman will become a wanted criminal and Neo will disown her Trivia identity after becoming a SelfMadeOrphan]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given that \'\'Roman Holiday\'\' is a prequel to \'\'RWBY\'\', anyone who\'s familiar with the show will already know that [[spoiler:Neo and Roman will survive their journeys and join forces as criminals]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given that \\\'\\\'Roman Holiday\\\'\\\' is a prequel to \\\'\\\'RWBY\\\'\\\', anyone who\\\'s familiar with the show will already know that [[spoiler:Roman will become a wanted criminal and Neo will disown her Trivia identity]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given that \'\'Roman Holiday\'\' is a prequel to \'\'RWBY\'\', anyone who\'s familiar with the show will already know that [[spoiler:Roman and Neo will survive their journeys and become criminals in the series]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given that \\\'\\\'Roman Holiday\\\'\\\' is a prequel to \\\'\\\'RWBY\\\'\\\', anyone who\\\'s familiar with the show will already know that [[spoiler:Neo and Roman will survive their journeys and join forces as criminals]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given that \'\'Roman Holiday\'\' is a prequel to \'\'RWBY\'\', anyone who\'s familiar with the show will already know that [[spoiler:Roman will eventually desert the Spider syndicate to continue his life as a thief and as for Neopolitan, she will renounce her Trivia persona after killing Jimmy and Carmel]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given that \\\'\\\'Roman Holiday\\\'\\\' is a prequel to \\\'\\\'RWBY\\\'\\\', anyone who\\\'s familiar with the show will already know that [[spoiler:Roman and Neo will survive their journeys and become criminals in the series]].
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Taking that into consideration, I revised the above entry. Hope this works.
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Taking that into consideration, I revised the above entry. Here goes:
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given \'\'Roman Holiday\'\' is a prequel to \'\'RWBY\'\', anyone who has watched the show before reading the book will already know that [[spoiler:Roman will eventually desert the Spider syndicate to continue his life as a thief and as for Neopolitan, she will disown her Trivia persona after killing Jimmy and Carmel]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given that \\\'\\\'Roman Holiday\\\'\\\' is a prequel to \\\'\\\'RWBY\\\'\\\', anyone who\\\'s familiar with the show will already know that [[spoiler:Roman will eventually desert the Spider syndicate to continue his life as a thief and as for Neopolitan, she will renounce her Trivia persona after killing Jimmy and Carmel]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given \'\'Roman Holiday\'\' is a prequel to \'\'RWBY\'\', anyone who has watched the show before reading the book will already know that [[spoiler:Roman will eventually desert the Spider syndicate and Neopolitan will disown her Trivia persona after killing Jimmy and Carmel]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given \\\'\\\'Roman Holiday\\\'\\\' is a prequel to \\\'\\\'RWBY\\\'\\\', anyone who has watched the show before reading the book will already know that [[spoiler:Roman will eventually desert the Spider syndicate to continue his life as a thief and as for Neopolitan, she will disown her Trivia persona after killing Jimmy and Carmel]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given \'\'Roman Holiday\'\' is a prequel to the nyone who has watched \'\'RWBY\'\' before reading \'\'Roman Holiday\'\' will already know that [[spoiler:Roman will eventually desert the Spider syndicate and Neopolitan will disown her Trivia persona after killing Jimmy and Carmel]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given \\\'\\\'Roman Holiday\\\'\\\' is a prequel to \\\'\\\'RWBY\\\'\\\', anyone who has watched the show before reading the book will already know that [[spoiler:Roman will eventually desert the Spider syndicate and Neopolitan will disown her Trivia persona after killing Jimmy and Carmel]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given \'\'Roman Holiday\'\' is set before the \'\'RWBY\'\', anyone who has watched the series before reading this book will already know that [[spoiler:Roman will eventually desert the Spider syndicate and Neopolitan will disown her Trivia persona after killing Jimmy and Carmel]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given \\\'\\\'Roman Holiday\\\'\\\' is a prequel to the nyone who has watched \\\'\\\'RWBY\\\'\\\' before reading \\\'\\\'Roman Holiday\\\'\\\' will already know that [[spoiler:Roman will eventually desert the Spider syndicate and Neopolitan will disown her Trivia persona after killing Jimmy and Carmel]].
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Do you think this writeup would work better?
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Taking that into consideration, I revised the above entry. Hope this works.
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given \'\'Roman Holiday\'\' is set before the \'\'RWBY\'\', anyone who has watched the series before reading this book will already know that [[spoiler:Roman will join forces with Trivia and Neopolitan will disown her Trivia persona after killing Jimmy and Carmel]].
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* ForegoneConclusion: Given \\\'\\\'Roman Holiday\\\'\\\' is set before the \\\'\\\'RWBY\\\'\\\', anyone who has watched the series before reading this book will already know that [[spoiler:Roman will eventually desert the Spider syndicate and Neopolitan will disown her Trivia persona after killing Jimmy and Carmel]].
