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I would agree with cutting it down. My version of this example would read something like this:
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I would agree with cutting it down. My version of this entry would read something like this:
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* OhCrap: After realising too late that he should have leveraged Qrow for the Winter Maiden, Ironwood decides to leverage Yang, Jaune and Ren. Once he learns from Harriet that Winter let them go, Ironwood has a shocked expression as he turns to face Winter.
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* OhCrap: After realising too late that he should have leveraged Qrow for the Winter Maiden, Ironwood decides to leverage Yang, Jaune and Ren. Once he learns from Harriet that Winter let them go, Ironwood has a brief panic as he turns to face Winter.
