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JustaPersin
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Lithones kids and Wheelie are the equivalent of test tube babies. How else would they give birth? I guess through a hatch, but I like the idea of robo babies being test tube babies.
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Lithones kids and Wheelie are the equivalent of test tube babies. How else would they give birth? I guess through a hatch, but I like the idea of robo babies being test tube babies. The Lithons look like they were built instead of grown inside of their moms. They have bolts on to them. If they was made out of nanobots, then why do they look like robots instead of shiny metallic people. Maybe they were built inside of their moms? I have a problem with that, for two reasons: first of all why not use nanotechnology? If they use nanobots then is no need to have a baby built inside of them when the nanities can act like cells. Another problem is why have sex? If Lithone kids were built inside of their moms, then why brothers having sex if she could just eat metal scrap? Maybe for blueprint, but that stuff can be done asexually. Yes reproducing asexually does have it’s problems, but maybe with tech they can work around it.
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--> FallenHero: Consider that two episodes ago, Daenerys played a large in helping to prevent the extinction of the human race when she commits her armies and dragons in the battle against the Army of the Dead. By the end of this episode, she has mass murdered a large part of the population of King\'s Landing, needlessly burning it down after the city\'s surrender.
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--> FallenHero: Consider that two episodes ago, Daenerys played a major in helping to prevent the extinction of the human race when she commits her armies and dragons in the battle against the Army of the Dead. By the end of this episode, she has mass murdered a large part of the population of King\\\'s Landing, needlessly burning it down after the city\\\'s surrender.
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--> FallenHero: Consider that two episodes ago, Daenerys played a large in helping to prevent the extinction of the human race when she aids the North with her armies and dragons in the battle against the Army of the Dead. By the end of this episode, she has mass murdered a large part of the population of King\'s Landing, needlessly burning it down after the city\'s surrender.
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--> FallenHero: Consider that two episodes ago, Daenerys played a large in helping to prevent the extinction of the human race when she commits her armies and dragons in the battle against the Army of the Dead. By the end of this episode, she has mass murdered a large part of the population of King\\\'s Landing, needlessly burning it down after the city\\\'s surrender.
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--> FallenHero: Consider that two episodes ago, Daenerys committed herself to helping prevent the extinction of the human race when she aids the North with her armies and dragons in the battle against the Army of the Dead. By the end of this episode, she has mass murdered a large part of the population of King\'s Landing, needlessly burning it down after the city\'s surrender.
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--> FallenHero: Consider that two episodes ago, Daenerys played a large in helping to prevent the extinction of the human race when she aids the North with her armies and dragons in the battle against the Army of the Dead. By the end of this episode, she has mass murdered a large part of the population of King\\\'s Landing, needlessly burning it down after the city\\\'s surrender.
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--> FallenHero: Consider that two episodes ago, Daenerys personally made a large contribution to helping prevent the extinction of the human race. By the end of this episode, she has mass murdered a large part of the population of King\'s Landing, needlessly burning it down after the city\'s surrender.
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--> FallenHero: Consider that two episodes ago, Daenerys committed herself to helping prevent the extinction of the human race when she aids the North with her armies and dragons in the battle against the Army of the Dead. By the end of this episode, she has mass murdered a large part of the population of King\\\'s Landing, needlessly burning it down after the city\\\'s surrender.
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--> FallenHero: Consider that two episodes ago, Daenerys personally played a major role in helping to prevent the extinction of the human race. By the end of this episode, she has mass murdered a large part of the population of King\'s Landing, needlessly burning it down after the city\'s surrender.
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--> FallenHero: Consider that two episodes ago, Daenerys personally made a large contribution to helping prevent the extinction of the human race. By the end of this episode, she has mass murdered a large part of the population of King\\\'s Landing, needlessly burning it down after the city\\\'s surrender.
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I\'m not really good at this but to take away some of the negativity while describing just the facts without going overboard? Changes are welcome!
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I\\\'m not really good at this but to take away some of the negativity while describing just the facts without going overboard? Still too harsh? Changes are welcome!
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--> FallenHero: Consider that two episodes ago, Daenerys personally played a major role in helping to prevent the extinction of the human race. By the end of this episode, she has needlessly burned down the whole of King\'s Landing, taking out a large part of its populace with it.
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--> FallenHero: Consider that two episodes ago, Daenerys personally played a major role in helping to prevent the extinction of the human race. By the end of this episode, she has mass murdered a large part of the population of King\\\'s Landing, needlessly burning it down after the city\\\'s surrender.
