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DeeChan87
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The BaseBreakingCharacter and VanillaProtagonist entries in the page seem to be the harshest. I agree he can rub people the wrong way, but saying he's a VanillaProtagonist might be pushing it. Again, this is my bias (and why we have a YMMV page, so :P ).
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The BaseBreakingCharacter and VanillaProtagonist entries in the page seem to be the harshest. I agree he can rub people the wrong way, but saying he\'s a VanillaProtagonist might be pushing it. Again, this is my bias (and why we have a YMMV page, so :P ).
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But this passage might be super harsh:
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But this passage might be super harsh: \"those who find him to be a painfully generic Vanilla Protagonist who isn\'t worth hogging screentime from the rest of the more compelling Ensemble Cast, and who is still too moronic and jerkish to deserve leadership of Voltron over the more universally popular Shiro despite the show Character Shilling him as such.\" Maybe changing the wording so it\'s less harsh on him could help.
Also putting him under an UnintentionallyUnsympathetic entry comes across as one-sided. Perhaps adding a CharacterDerailment (with the caveat that Yeun was busy with other projects) or UnintentionallySympathetic entry for him. And maybe the Blade under UnintentiallyUnsympathetic for their treatment of him. These are just suggestions, and I admit that I\'ve wanted to add these entries to balance things out in Keith\'s favor.
(Edit: Aaaaaaaaaand, I jumped the gun)
Also putting him under an UnintentionallyUnsympathetic entry comes across as one-sided. Perhaps adding a CharacterDerailment (with the caveat that Yeun was busy with other projects) or UnintentionallySympathetic entry for him. And maybe the Blade under UnintentiallyUnsympathetic for their treatment of him. These are just suggestions, and I admit that I\'ve wanted to add these entries to balance things out in Keith\'s favor.
(Edit: Aaaaaaaaaand, I jumped the gun)
