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DonZabu
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The opening paragraphs seem kind of unfocused. They go from his legacy to the meth addiction to his death and \'\'then\'\' to his early life. Re-arrange it, maybe?
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The opening paragraphs seem kind of unfocused. They go from his legacy to the meth addiction to his death and \\\'\\\'then\\\'\\\' to his early life. Perhaps a bit of re-arranging is in order?
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The opening paragraphs seem kind of unfocused. They go from his legacy to the meth addiction to his death and \'\'then\'\' to his early life.
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The opening paragraphs seem kind of unfocused. They go from his legacy to the meth addiction to his death and \\\'\\\'then\\\'\\\' to his early life. Re-arrange it, maybe?
