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Although Gideon is the only fox shown with retractable claws I would vote to put it on the story page because having retractable claws gives Gideon a chance to do a dramatic yet ominous flourish increasing the level of threat toward Judy. He says
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Although Gideon is the only fox shown with retractable claws I would vote to put it on the story page because having retractable claws gives Gideon a chance to do a dramatic yet ominous flourish that underscores the level of threat toward Judy. He says \"Oh, you don\'t know when to quit, do you?\" and then pops open the claws on his right hand with a very audible \"chink\" sound, cutting to Judy gasping at the sight.
Since the ArtisticLicenseBiology is done one time only in service of the story instead of being an ongoing character trait of Gideon (or any other fox), I think it\'s more appropriate on the story page.
Since the ArtisticLicenseBiology is done one time only in service of the story instead of being an ongoing character trait of Gideon (or any other fox), I think it\'s more appropriate on the story page.
