The entry listed under WritersCannotDoMath seems to be more of an issue to do with the writers' lacking knowledge about the British school system, rather than a failure calculate vacation time. I couldn't think of the right trope for it.
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The entry listed under WritersCannotDoMath seems to be more of an issue to do with the writers\' lacking knowledge about the British school system, rather than a failure to calculate vacation time. I couldn\'t think of the right trope for it.
The entry listed under WritersCannotDoMath seems to be more of an issue to do with the writers' lacking knowledge about the British school system, rather than a failure calculate vacation time.
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The entry listed under WritersCannotDoMath seems to be more of an issue to do with the writers\' lacking knowledge about the British school system, rather than a failure calculate vacation time. I couldn\'t think of the right trope for it.
* SophisticatedAsHell: His apology to Judy as an adult included some terms far above Gideon's usual vocabulary level, with the implication being that he was repeating something he had heard from a psychiatrist.
-->'''Gideon:''' Hey Judy, I-I'd just like to say I'm sorry for how I behaved in my youth. I had a lot of self-doubt and it manifested itself in the form of unchecked rage and aggression. [''{{Beat}}''] I was a major jerk.
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* SophisticatedAsHell: His apology to Judy as an adult included some terms far above Gideon\'s usual vocabulary level, with the implication being that he was repeating something he had heard from a psychiatrist.
-->\'\'\'Gideon:\'\'\' Hey Judy, I-I\'d just like to say I\'m sorry for how I behaved in my youth. I had a lot of self-doubt and it manifested itself in the form of unchecked rage and aggression. [\'\'{{Beat}}\'\'] I was a major jerk.
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which is simple and concise, but could invite outcry of being speculative since it doesn't include the link to the evidence that this implication was intentional.
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which is simple and concise, but could invite outcry of being speculative since it doesn\'t include the link to the evidence that this implication was intentional.
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* SophisticatedAsHell: His apology to Judy as an adult included some terms far above Gideon's usual vocabulary level, in a way that lead many to believe he had been seeing a psychiatrist. This was later confirmed in [[http://www.theqandapodcast.com/2016/10/zootopia-q.html a 2016 podcast]] with [[WordOfGod Screenwriter (and Gideon's voice actor) Phil Johnston]], who confirmed that Gideon was reciting something he heard in therapy.
-->'''Gideon:''' Hey Judy, I-I'd just like to say I'm sorry for how I behaved in my youth. I had a lot of self-doubt and it manifested itself in the form of unchecked rage and aggression. [''{{Beat}}''] I was a major jerk.
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* SophisticatedAsHell: His apology to Judy as an adult included some terms far above Gideon\'s usual vocabulary level, in a way that lead many to believe he had been seeing a psychiatrist. This was later confirmed in [[http://www.theqandapodcast.com/2016/10/zootopia-q.html a 2016 podcast]] with [[WordOfGod Screenwriter (and Gideon\'s voice actor) Phil Johnston]], who confirmed that Gideon was reciting something he heard in therapy.
-->\'\'\'Gideon:\'\'\' Hey Judy, I-I\'d just like to say I\'m sorry for how I behaved in my youth. I had a lot of self-doubt and it manifested itself in the form of unchecked rage and aggression. [\'\'{{Beat}}\'\'] I was a major jerk.
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which is more thorough and provides evidence but doesn't flow nearly as well, and its emphasis on how people interpreted it feels inappropriate outside the YMMV page.
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which is more thorough and provides evidence but doesn\'t flow nearly as well, and its emphasis on how people interpreted it feels inappropriate outside the YMMV page.
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I like the first one better. Knowing that the evidence backing up this implication exists, I don't see the need to clutter the example with it. And this discussion thread can be referred back to if anyone objects.
However I'm open to suggestions as to a better way to more fully incorporate the essense of the current ThereAreNoTherapists example without running into the problems of my second version above.
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I like the first one better. Knowing that the evidence backing up this implication exists, I don\'t see the need to clutter the example with it. And this discussion thread can be referred back to if anyone objects. However, I\'m open to suggestions as to a better way to more fully incorporate the essense of the current ThereAreNoTherapists example without running into the problems of my second version above.
* SophisticatedAsHell: His apology to Judy as an adult included some terms far above Gideon's usual vocabulary level, with the implication being that he was repeating something he had heard from a psychiatrist.
-->'''Gideon:''' Hey Judy, I-I'd just like to say I'm sorry for how I behaved in my youth. I had a lot of self-doubt and it manifested itself in the form of unchecked rage and aggression. [''{{Beat}}''] I was a major jerk.
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* SophisticatedAsHell: His apology to Judy as an adult included some terms far above Gideon\'s usual vocabulary level, with the implication being that he was repeating something he had heard from a psychiatrist.
-->\'\'\'Gideon:\'\'\' Hey Judy, I-I\'d just like to say I\'m sorry for how I behaved in my youth. I had a lot of self-doubt and it manifested itself in the form of unchecked rage and aggression. [\'\'{{Beat}}\'\'] I was a major jerk.
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which is simple and concise, but could invite outcry of being speculative since it doesn't include the link to the evidence that this implication was intentional.
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which is simple and concise, but could invite outcry of being speculative since it doesn\'t include the link to the evidence that this implication was intentional.
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* SophisticatedAsHell: His apology to Judy as an adult included some terms far above Gideon's usual vocabulary level, in a way that lead many to believe he had been seeing a psychiatrist. This was later confirmed in [[http://www.theqandapodcast.com/2016/10/zootopia-q.html a 2016 podcast]] with [[WordOfGod Screenwriter (and Gideon's voice actor) Phil Johnston]], who confirmed that Gideon was reciting something he heard in therapy.
-->'''Gideon:''' Hey Judy, I-I'd just like to say I'm sorry for how I behaved in my youth. I had a lot of self-doubt and it manifested itself in the form of unchecked rage and aggression. [''{{Beat}}''] I was a major jerk.
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* SophisticatedAsHell: His apology to Judy as an adult included some terms far above Gideon\'s usual vocabulary level, in a way that lead many to believe he had been seeing a psychiatrist. This was later confirmed in [[http://www.theqandapodcast.com/2016/10/zootopia-q.html a 2016 podcast]] with [[WordOfGod Screenwriter (and Gideon\'s voice actor) Phil Johnston]], who confirmed that Gideon was reciting something he heard in therapy.
-->\'\'\'Gideon:\'\'\' Hey Judy, I-I\'d just like to say I\'m sorry for how I behaved in my youth. I had a lot of self-doubt and it manifested itself in the form of unchecked rage and aggression. [\'\'{{Beat}}\'\'] I was a major jerk.
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which provides evidence but doesn't flow nearly as well, and its emphasis on how people interpreted it feels inappropriate outside the YMMV page.
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which is more thorough and provides evidence but doesn\'t flow nearly as well, and its emphasis on how people interpreted it feels inappropriate outside the YMMV page.
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I like the first one better. Knowing that the evidence backing up this implication exists, I don't see the need to clutter the example with it. And this discussion thread can be referred back to if anyone objects.
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I like the first one better. Knowing that the evidence backing up this implication exists, I don\'t see the need to clutter the example with it. And this discussion thread can be referred back to if anyone objects.
However I\'m open to suggestions as to a better way to more fully incorporate the essense of the current ThereAreNoTherapists example without running into the problems of my second version above.
* SophisticatedAsHell: His apology to Judy as an adult included some terms far above Gideon's usual vocabulary level, with the implication being that he was repeating something he had heard from a psychiatrist.
-->'''Gideon:''' Hey Judy, I-I'd just like to say I'm sorry for how I behaved in my youth. I had a lot of self-doubt and it manifested itself in the form of unchecked rage and aggression. [''{{Beat}}''] I was a major jerk.
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* SophisticatedAsHell: His apology to Judy as an adult included some terms far above Gideon\'s usual vocabulary level, with the implication being that he was repeating something he had heard from a psychiatrist.
-->\'\'\'Gideon:\'\'\' Hey Judy, I-I\'d just like to say I\'m sorry for how I behaved in my youth. I had a lot of self-doubt and it manifested itself in the form of unchecked rage and aggression. [\'\'{{Beat}}\'\'] I was a major jerk.
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which is simple and concise, but could invite outcry of being speculative since it doesn't include the link to the evidence that this implication was intentional.
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which is simple and concise, but could invite outcry of being speculative since it doesn\'t include the link to the evidence that this implication was intentional.
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* SophisticatedAsHell: His apology to Judy as an adult included some terms far above Gideon's usual vocabulary level, in a way that lead many to believe he had been seeing a psychiatrist. This was later confirmed in [[http://www.theqandapodcast.com/2016/10/zootopia-q.html a 2016 podcast]] with [[WordOfGod Screenwriter (and Gideon's voice actor) Phil Johnston]], who confirmed that Gideon was reciting something he heard in therapy.
-->'''Gideon:''' Hey Judy, I-I'd just like to say I'm sorry for how I behaved in my youth. I had a lot of self-doubt and it manifested itself in the form of unchecked rage and aggression. [''{{Beat}}''] I was a major jerk.
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* SophisticatedAsHell: His apology to Judy as an adult included some terms far above Gideon\'s usual vocabulary level, in a way that lead many to believe he had been seeing a psychiatrist. This was later confirmed in [[http://www.theqandapodcast.com/2016/10/zootopia-q.html a 2016 podcast]] with [[WordOfGod Screenwriter (and Gideon\'s voice actor) Phil Johnston]], who confirmed that Gideon was reciting something he heard in therapy.
-->\'\'\'Gideon:\'\'\' Hey Judy, I-I\'d just like to say I\'m sorry for how I behaved in my youth. I had a lot of self-doubt and it manifested itself in the form of unchecked rage and aggression. [\'\'{{Beat}}\'\'] I was a major jerk.
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which provides evidence but doesn't flow nearly as well, and its emphasis on how people interpreted it feels inappropriate outside the YMMV page.
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which provides evidence but doesn\'t flow nearly as well, and its emphasis on how people interpreted it feels inappropriate outside the YMMV page.
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I like the first one better. Knowing that the evidence backing up this implication exists, I don't see the need to clutter the example with it.
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I like the first one better. Knowing that the evidence backing up this implication exists, I don\'t see the need to clutter the example with it. And this discussion thread can be referred back to if anyone objects.
