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1)the heroes bringing the DEAD villians back. Well if the heroes didn't do a future villian might do it instead. Which is the better option Isle improsiment or risk a future villain attempt to bring (Dead) villians back?
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1)the heroes bringing the DEAD villians back. Well if the heroes didn\'t do a future villian might do it instead. Which is the better option Isle improsiment or risk a future villain attempt to bring (Dead) villians back?
2)I think that Chad\'s actions (ie being a jerk) is that Cinderella spoiled him too much just so show that she cared. (and basically if I was Cinderella I would have done the same)
2)I think that Chad\'s actions (ie being a jerk) is that Cinderella spoiled him too much just so show that she cared. (and basically if I was Cinderella I would have done the same)
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Then, like I said, let's discuss my
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Then, like I said, let\'s discuss my \"shit\" writeup.
* Karin Kanzuki, as usual. She\'s [[CharacterDevelopment evolved]] from the RichBitch she used to be in \'\'Alpha 3\'\', now showing much more maturity and signs of compassion in addition to her snobbish personality. Fans who love her do so for this very reason, while her ego (and the CharacterShilling she gets) are turn-offs to her detractors.
Does that improve the problem? It feels disingenuous to talk about her AwesomeEgo without at least stating that there are people who don\'t like it.
* Karin Kanzuki, as usual. She\'s [[CharacterDevelopment evolved]] from the RichBitch she used to be in \'\'Alpha 3\'\', now showing much more maturity and signs of compassion in addition to her snobbish personality. Fans who love her do so for this very reason, while her ego (and the CharacterShilling she gets) are turn-offs to her detractors.
Does that improve the problem? It feels disingenuous to talk about her AwesomeEgo without at least stating that there are people who don\'t like it.
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Then, like I said, let's discuss my shit writeup.
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Then, like I said, let\'s discuss my \"shit\" writeup.
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* Karin Kanzuki, as usual. She's [[CharacterDevelopment evolved]] from the RichBitch she used to be in ''Alpha 3'', now showing much more maturity and signs of compassion in addition to her snobbish personality. Fans who love her do so for this very reason, while her ego (and the CharacterShilling she gets) are turn-offs to her detractors.
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* Karin Kanzuki, as usual. She\'s [[CharacterDevelopment evolved]] from the RichBitch she used to be in \'\'Alpha 3\'\', now showing much more maturity and signs of compassion in addition to her snobbish personality. Fans who love her do so for this very reason, while her ego (and the CharacterShilling she gets) are turn-offs to her detractors.
