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* Noah in ''Webcomic/ElGoonishShive'' [[http://www.egscomics.com/index.php?id=1212 empathizes with Justin's anger issues:]]
-->'''Noah:''' I am good at controlling my temper ''now'', but I was suspended on my first day of high school for beating up two seniors who were playing keep-away with my backpack. I heard they are offensive linemen on a college football team now. Whatever that means.
-->'''Noah:''' I am good at controlling my temper ''now'', but I was suspended on my first day of high school for beating up two seniors who were playing keep-away with my backpack. I heard they are offensive linemen on a college football team now. Whatever that means.
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* Noah in \'\'Webcomic/ElGoonishShive\'\' [[http://www.egscomics.com/index.php?id=1212 empathizes with Justin\'s anger issues:]]
-->\'\'\'Noah:\'\'\' I am good at controlling my temper \'\'now\'\', but I was suspended on my first day of high school for beating up two seniors who were playing keep-away with my backpack. I heard they are offensive linemen on a college football team now. Whatever that means.
-->\'\'\'Noah:\'\'\' I am good at controlling my temper \'\'now\'\', but I was suspended on my first day of high school for beating up two seniors who were playing keep-away with my backpack. I heard they are offensive linemen on a college football team now. Whatever that means.
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I don't think Noah is subtly bragging, I think he really does have no idea what an offensive linesman is or that what he did is in any way notable apart from indicating he needed better control of his temper.
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Given Noah\'s characterisation, it doesn\'t read like subtly bragging, it reads like he really does have no idea what an offensive linesman is or that what he did is in any way notable apart from indicating he needed better control of his temper.
