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HolisticAerie
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The Arrow Entry should be changed, as there was plenty of Abandoning Ship with Oliver and Laurel in the first two seasons, but I've yet to see any proof that Olicity fans are jumping their own ship. In fact, most of the people I see leaving the show are Laurel and/or comic book fans. So this is highly inaccurate.
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The Arrow Entry should be changed, as there was plenty of Abandoning Ship with Oliver and Laurel in the first two seasons, but I\'ve yet to see any proof that Olicity fans are jumping their own ship. In fact, most of the people I see leaving the show are Laurel and/or comic book fans. So this is highly inaccurate.
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The Arrow Entry should be changed, as there was plenty of Abandoning Ship with Oliver and Laurel in the first two seasons, but I've yet to see any proof that Olicity fans are jumping their own ship. In fact, most of the people I see leaving the show are Laurel and/or comic book fans. So this is highly inaccurate.
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The Arrow Entry should be changed, as there was plenty of Abandoning Ship with Oliver and Laurel in the first two seasons, but I\'ve yet to see any proof that Olicity fans are jumping their own ship. In fact, most of the people I see leaving the show are Laurel and/or comic book fans. So this is highly inaccurate.
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\'\'\'You\'d Think (not you\'d expect):\'\'\' Phyrra would have the talk about the offer to train Jaune in their dorm room. They could wait to go to the roof for after the conversation if he says \
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\\\'\\\'\\\'You\\\'d Think (not you\\\'d expect):\\\'\\\'\\\' Phyrra would have the talk about the offer to train Jaune in their dorm room. They could wait to go to the roof for after the conversation if he says \\\"yes\\\", which he doesn\\\'t right away (even if they didn\\\'t know that Cardin was eavesdropping).
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\\\'\\\'\\\'You\\\'d Think:\\\'\\\'\\\' Phyrra would do do anything other than what she does.
\\\'\\\'\\\'Instead:\\\'\\\'\\\' She takes him to the roof to have their talk, but little do they know that it\\\'s above Cardin\\\'s room, where he overhears everything, including Jaune\\\'s DarkSecret about the fact that he snuck into Beacon, which he then uses to bribe Jaunne into doing all his homework after Phyrra leaves.
I think Jaune should\\\'ve just stood up to him right away, even if he\\\'s weaker. Man up, you know?
I still think the roof bit was still a WhatAnIdiot moment, either way.
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\\\'\\\'\\\'You\\\'d Think:\\\'\\\'\\\' Phyrra would do do anything other than what she does.
\\\'\\\'\\\'Instead:\\\'\\\'\\\' She takes him to the roof to have their talk, but little do they know that it\\\'s above Cardin\\\'s room, where he overhears everything, including Jaune\\\'s DarkSecret about the fact that he snuck into Beacon, which he then uses to bribe Jaunne into doing all his homework after Phyrra leaves.
I think Jaune should\\\'ve just stood up to him right away, even if he\\\'s weaker. Man up, you know?
I still think the roof bit was still a WhatAnIdiot moment, either way.
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You\'d Think (not you\'d expect): Phyrra would have the talk about the offer to train Jaune in their dorm room. They could wait to go to the roof for after the conversation if he says \
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\\\'\\\'\\\'You\\\'d Think (not you\\\'d expect):\\\'\\\'\\\' Phyrra would have the talk about the offer to train Jaune in their dorm room. They could wait to go to the roof for after the conversation if he says \\\"yes\\\", which he doesn\\\'t right away (even if they didn\\\'t know that Cardin was eavesdropping).
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\\\'\\\'\\\'You\\\'d Think:\\\'\\\'\\\' Phyrra would do anything, anything, except for what she ends up doing.
\\\'\\\'\\\'Instead:\\\'\\\'\\\' She takes him to the roof to have their talk, but little do they know that it\\\'s above Cardin\\\'s room, where he overhears everything, including Jaune\\\'s DarkSecret about the fact that he snuck into Beacon, which he then uses to bribe Jaunne into doing all his homework after Phyrra leaves.
I think Jaune should\\\'ve just stood up to him right away, even if he\\\'s weaker. Man up, you know?
I still think the roof bit was still a WhatAnIdiot moment, either way.
