Knouge related M&SOlympic WAff Fix fic help.

i need help with the fix fic i talked about on the felt sorrry for Rouge.

So here's how the fanfic goes... After the olympics, Knuckles finds Rouge, shivering and freezing cold, let to die on the side of the mountain. Knuckles has a My God What Have I Done moment and takes her off the mountain and goes home with her. He then gives her some warm choclate and a few blankets. Then she starts crying about not winning a single medal and not even being allowed to. He then gives her one of his old medals. King Boo hears of this place, but Knuckles drives him off. Knuckles and Rouge ultimatley end up fallung in love again and getting revenge on the people who intedened her to win no medals.

Well, for a start, you might want to get yourself a better grasp of spelling and grammar. Writing a story without that is like trying to make a Sunday roast without knowing how to operate an oven.

Here's the re spelled summary

So here's how the fanfic goes... After the Olympics, Knuckles finds Rouge, shivering and freezing cold, let to die on the side of the mountain. Knuckles has a My God, What Have I Done? moment and takes her off the mountain and goes home with her. He then gives her some warm chocolate and a few blankets. Then she starts crying about not winning a single medal and not even being allowed to. He then gives her one of his old medals. King Boo hears of this place, but Knuckles drives him off. Knuckles and Rouge ultimately end up falling in love again and getting revenge on the people who intended her to win no medals.

Do you like the summary, laculus?

THUMP> it is called "The Ice Is Broken"

here is an exerpt.

Knuckles was looking out all over the icy stadium after the closing ceremony. He saw the crowd cheering, his teammates beside him. And the rivals. The rivals were random competitors sent to beat the teams. They all looked disappointed at losing. One of them was his girl, Rouge. He then saw the signal to exit the ring. He had one last glance at her before leaving.

So, what do you think? Anyone? Anyone?

Needs improvement, but it can work.