A wandering user
#2: May 2nd 2018 at 7:10:47 AM
It's quiet...too quiet...
The only good fanboy, is a redeemed fanboy.
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OK, so in recommendation from a fellow troper, I've decided to open a thread based on my web-novel that is currently undergoing revision (Meaning the main story is completed but needs some more expansion after enough feedback.). It'll be appreciated from you guys in not just giving your thoughts and what I can do better but also if you like, discuss the flow of events, characterization and such.
It's published on many sites but Wattpad is the main one where most of the chapters are published.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/78626368-earth-warriors-undergoing-revision
Genre: Science Fiction with a dash of war and adventure. Planned N# of chapters: 50 (52 when Prologue and Epilogue are counted.) Main inspirations: Anime, Star Wars, Musou games and a bit of Tokusatsu. Central themes: What is the true meaning of being a warrior? Does Humanity deserve a place in the galactic community in spite of their shortcomings? Is stagnation really necessary or not?
Brief summary: It is the year 2026, an alien race called the Zlocu are waging war across the stars, believing that the era of peace was slowing down the next step of universal evolution and now are determined to "awake" everyone to let them know how peace made them "weak".
Planet Earth took one of the worst hits from their onslaught, given that they were recovering from a devastating global conflict. Despite the efforts of various governments, the Zlocu occupied 80% of Earth. Everything seemed hopeless until a group of celestial beings called "The Guardians" started to intervene in the conflict, as result of the discovery of the four physical incarnations that represent the principles of the Universe itself, all of them found on planet Earth.
Now, these four heroes and other factions must work together to defeat the Zlocu Empire and Malgan's reign of tyranny. But more than war, they also need to know what is the meaning of being a hero and a warrior in the modern world.
Also, I highly apologize if you find awkwardly worded sentences and such, English is not my first language and combined with a bit of my Asperger's makes a bit too hard for me to come up with complex sentences and words.
The only good fanboy, is a redeemed fanboy.