#2: Mar 23rd 2017 at 3:49:04 AM
No, you didn't do it right at all. You ignored half the trope. It's not just hitting things, it's why the character is hitting things. You got better as you went on, but you still need more of the why.
edited 23rd Mar '17 3:50:13 AM by shimaspawn
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