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Swordofknowledge Swordofknowledge from I like it here... Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
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#1: Oct 16th 2015 at 6:28:44 PM

Pretty much what the title says. I've written a three-book story, during which the thoughts of the characters are displayed in italics. I just realized that I cannot find other stories off the top of my head where this is done, and I'm really freaking out right now. Am I...wrong? Will I have to somehow redo this whole thing? Internal dialogue is a pretty big part of the story, so I'm really worried.

"Fear is a tyrant and a despot, more terrible than the rack, more potent than the snake." —Edgar Wallace
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#2: Oct 16th 2015 at 6:31:46 PM

I saw it in Dune, I think in a few chapter books I read when I was little... Usually thoughts in italics are in books with POV in third person limited or omniscient. Maybe you were reading books in different PO Vs. I say don't worry about it.

Life is hard, that's why no one survives.
Swordofknowledge Swordofknowledge from I like it here... Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
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#3: Oct 16th 2015 at 6:36:14 PM

Thanks for the reply. There are four protagonist, each of whom has a first-person perspective. It switches to third person at times when dealing with events/people not related to the protagonists. But I use italic-thoughts with at all times. I'm just worried that it would stand in the way of it being published sad

edited 16th Oct '15 6:36:22 PM by Swordofknowledge

"Fear is a tyrant and a despot, more terrible than the rack, more potent than the snake." —Edgar Wallace
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#4: Oct 16th 2015 at 7:37:14 PM

It's pretty standard.

Nous restons ici.
Wolf1066 Crazy Kiwi from New Zealand Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Dancing with myself
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#5: Oct 16th 2015 at 7:40:26 PM

I can't think of the names of the books off-hand but I've seen numerous occasions where the thoughts are italicised and I generally view any unquoted italic sentences as the thoughts of the POV character.

"If it's in quotes and there's only one or two italicised words, I take it as emphasis."

I note a lot of people use that convention in the CDT threads here, as well.

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#6: Oct 17th 2015 at 12:42:48 AM

My question is, what do you use for emphasis if thoughts are already done in italics?

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Wolf1066 Crazy Kiwi from New Zealand Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Dancing with myself
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#7: Oct 17th 2015 at 1:39:40 AM

[up]Convention is that you switch to standard text:

I should have known that this was a really bad move.

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#8: Oct 17th 2015 at 2:08:27 AM

I can't remember any works I've read where it wasn't done this way, but I guess it might be more common in Swedish books/translations maybe?

Still a great "screw depression" song even after seven years.
editerguy from Australia Since: Jan, 2013 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
#9: Oct 17th 2015 at 2:15:29 AM

Don't worry, this is common. An optional convention, I guess.

washington213 Since: Jan, 2013
#10: Oct 17th 2015 at 9:05:37 AM

Pretty much every book I've read does this.

PapilioTaempesta Since: Dec, 2014
#11: Dec 18th 2020 at 9:28:39 AM

It is also common in Spanish literature. For example, in the Kadingir series, Telepathy is used extensively by many characters, and it is always depicted as standard dialogue in Italics. Inner thoughts, on the other hand, are simple text in Italics with no special marks.

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