Desire for Critique

I started writing Fanfiction back when most girls do...Middle school...After a while I took a break, started creating my own characters, and learning the ins and outs of tropes and how to make a good story that's NOT pure smut.

When getting back into Ninja Turtles I wondered what would happen if the Green Machine met my Anthro-Furry Characters the Space Beasts

I try to set out to keep the Ninja Turtles in character as much as possible (While keeping in mind all character development that happened throughout the 2003 series) And for the most part it's the Turtles and the Humanimals sharing memories and explaining how their worlds work

What I wish from any Troper reviewers is one thing...Try to overlook the spelling/grammar/punctuation errors I know I made a few I'm well aware of them...What I wish most is that...Is my story believable in the minds of the Tropers? Are both my original characters and the Turtles well written? None of my characters Sue-ish...And Since there is romance...I try to make it as believable as possible and as far away from Twilight Smut as possible.

I also try to incorporate some Xenofiction And Culture Clash The Humanimals think more like Animals which causes some confusion for the Turtles who have a more Human mindset https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10066606/1/The-Humanimal-Mutant-Dialogues

Did I say something wrong?

I don't think so. Rather, I think you've unfortunately found an uninterested audience.

Sigh...It feels like bad luck with me...Whenever I ask anyone online to look at something I've written nobody is interested