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Jetyl The Dev Cat from my apartment Since: Jan, 2013 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters

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#26: Aug 26th 2013 at 6:46:33 AM

okay so I've written most of the scene, but I am stuck on the last bits of dialogue. literally the last 2 dialogue balloons before punch to the face happens. so here's what I got so far...

Random Guy: Sam are you a chick?

Sam: wh-what did you say?

Random Guy: a girl down there said you were a girl. is that true?

Sam: How did she know that?

Random guy: So its True!! You've been lying to me the whole time!!

Sam: (don't have Dialogue here)

Random Guy: (don't have dialogue here)

Walter: (taps shoulder) excuse me.

Random Guy: Ugh, WHAT?! (punch to the face)

so I kinda need help with those two bits of dialogue, or you think I should change what I wrote that'd be helpful (Note on the changing part. since these are in speech balloons any replacement dialogue's probably gonna need to be a rough size of what's there).

I'm afraid I can't explain myself, sir. Because I am not myself, you see?

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