Fuck you, Fascist sympathizers
#2: May 6th 2013 at 7:23:00 PM
The only possible problem would be the one you pointed out yourself: is there enough signalling going on here? Will it feel like this comes out of nowhere to the point that the reader is just leafing through to try to figure out why the characters are reacting as they do?
Otherwise it seems fine.
#3: May 7th 2013 at 4:27:06 AM
edited 18th Jun '13 9:11:39 AM by TheMuse
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edited 18th Jun '13 9:11:31 AM by TheMuse