I've gotten some mixed opinions about an idea for a webcomic which I have been developing for over a month. Since there are so many writers on this site, I would like to see what fellow tropers thing.
"Shortly after transferring to a new school, Ray begins to receive threatening notes from an anonymous admirer. When one of these threats is carried out, the sender gives him an ultimatum: "Kiss me before the end of the school year, and I'll tell you everything... However, if you fail to figure me in time, or I hear about you kissing anybody else, the truth will disappear forever." Now he must win the devotion of three girls, all the while knowing that one of them is a murderer."
Please don't be afraid to be honest, whatever you may think.