Poor Image: Strongly Worded Letter

Here's a less wordy replacement:

In this case, I don't mind the wordiness. All you really need to read is the first line. Or, failing that, you could just look at the drawings in green.

I think the current image works fine. The suggested replacement doesn't really show "strongly worded" as much as it does understatement.

That. It looks like it's in a protest, where even an understatement would have the intended effect. This trope is about something that falls way below any kind of useful action.

Agreed. I like the current as well, but it's really artifacted; does it look like that in the actual strip?

Yep.

Granted, it then is used to load a typewriter that... oh wait, no. It really was nothing but a pointless letter.

...It did raise the boss's SICK BURN meter, though.

Well, no, it eliminates Demonhead Mobster Kingpin's second lifebar, that's gotta count for something.

Wait, so he did load it into the tommygunwriter?

He fired it letter-by-letter

Bump; any other thoughts?

Clock is set.

Clock's up; locking for inactivity/lack of consensus. No action is to be taken based on this thread.